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Originally posted by A boy in a dress
reply to post by nenothtu
That bush did rustle and it was BIAD getting caught-short.
I did scold him as I post his latest episode on the thread and also
warned him to check there isn't a highway behind him when he...
well, you know.
Damn Motorway cameras!
Originally posted by wildtimes
So.....can I get a vote from you all on whether or not to post my draft as is? Or, if anyone would like to copy and edit it, that's cool, too.....
an actual "collaborated" post.....the rest of you can correct any mis-characterizations I've made for Sslar, Mucklebones, and Ben....as their creators.
Can we just try it this one time?
We'll call mine: draft W
I'll wait for drafts B, N, and S, in no particular order (except I listed them alphabetically).....
I like where BIAD's post is going...with Muckles now being a target, too!! Got my adrenaline kicked into gear!
Originally posted by wildtimes
Also, awaiting your assessment of the Cecilia's landing.....and then we can move along!
I'll go ahead and post the draft then, cool? Then back up to fill in the holes (if needed)...and away we go from there!
As for Adam's whereabouts....sure, I can write his reaction. But can you tell me, how much time we're talking about, from when the Fighter left with the picnic basket to melt-down? Is it still the same day? It appears to be evening/end of activity time....and Silo was the last one in the Swamp. Right?
Did everyone just go back to work? Or did they all take the rest of the day off to recover from the trauma? What did Ship say to Moriah, btw? Is Ship up to full steam yet? Who would be receiving any signal from planet-side? Chumley?
Also, awaiting your assessment of the Cecilia's landing.....and then we can move along!
I'm imagining Adam went back to the Recovery Bay for some solo processing time, he or whoever had dismissed the twins from further lessons (if they weren't already 'sent to their rooms' to calm down or whatever)....then he notices Sslar. He hadn't noticed before because he was so excited and relieved by Dag's rapprochement...so happy he spontaneously zoomed out to the canteen to meet up with them all at the Fighter.
How did he know they were going? Did you have a scene between his talk with Dag and arrival with sandwiches?
At least, can you give me an idea if you had an imagined a sequence of events for Adam, from Dag's departure of his office to boarding the Fighter?
I'll go ahead and post the draft then, cool? Then back up to fill in the holes (if needed)...and away we go from there!
I've got nothing to say about it - not my characters.
I've got nothing to say about it - other than I like it!
Originally posted by wildtimes
reply to post by nenothtu
link didn't work.....using Chrome.
Originally posted by silo13
I have not read yet from Neno - or I missed it - when he/BIAD contacted Ship or if they did so I can't tell you.
I stuck a 9mm in my field jacket pocket and ran over there, and made those dogs behave without firing a shot. It was touch and go for a few seconds, They charged me, all teeth and slobber, but instead of backing up or running away, I snatched that pistol out of my pocket and drew down on the lead dog and yelled "JUST WHO THE HELL DO YOU THING YOU"RE CHARGING AT?" I kid you not, when I did that the dog stopped short, the following dog stopped, and they both sat right down. I wouldn't have believed it myself if I hadn't been there. I was sure one of us - either me or them - were about to get eaten, and it was all over just that quick.
...I ask because neno is about to make those wolves in his sight sit down and behave unless
there's something specific in mind for the wolves and the eyes.
Actually, it may not matter what he does, because he's not going to kill them - he's about to
have an episode reflecting one I had a few years ago when a frantic neighbor called my house
from work and said that two "strays" - a Rottweiler and a Pit Bull - had her son trapped in the house.
still gagged a little in my throat thinking he just might try to shove those pork-pies into his own face.
ACK!! Or wear them on a string around his neck. Ew ew ew yuck!!