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Originally posted by _Phoenix_
reply to post by antar
Why would you suddenly want a pee in that situation?
Anyway if this was true, I would not have listened to anything he says, I would say that all his threats are an illusion, that everything around you is to scare you into accepting his offer, and nothing bad will happen to you, that you and god has control over your soul. That is why he's so desperate to scare you into accepting, because he doesn't have control, you do.
But this does sound made up, even if it's true haha, I'm sure you know and expect that thou.
[edit on 6-7-2009 by _Phoenix_]
Originally posted by seentoomuch
She was 15 at the time and (sorry for saying this Antar) but that was a long time ago. It is very difficult to write experiences from years past, it takes me a day or two of alone time to write just one experience. I have to relive it by relaxing, putting on the music I liked to listen to at that time and in my mind I am there again. I relive an action or two, note the location details, etc. and then I write a paragraph of what I just walked through. Then the process starts all over again for each of the following paragraphs.
Sooo, having explained the process to you I noticed that Antar is a pretty fast poster and perhaps a detail or two was overlooked, but that does not mean that the experience is untrue. It means to me that she rushed the posts perhaps.
STM
[edit on 7/7/2009 by seentoomuch]
Originally posted by DOADOA
reply to post by antar
ok so i read it but judging by your first few paragraphs i must say you are testing our intelligence.
first, if you were 15, how old was your boyfriend? i'd say 18-20 at most. you can't get a job in the casino unless you are at or over the age of 21 no matter the position, busboy, janitor, waiter, dealer whatever, must be 21 and over. he can't be 21 because he bragged about buying alcohol without an ID. further, it is considered statutory rape if you were 15 and he was over the age of 18. regardless, how do you explain these notable inconsistencies?
you write as if you are trying too hard to write a legit novel. you are either testing your skill as a writer ( which i find lacking) or you're just a flat out liar.
[edit on 7-7-2009 by DOADOA]
Originally posted by antar
Thankyou everyone for your thoughtful posts, I think that it would be best that I finish my true account before I begin to answer any questions.
I love how people say this 'sounds' familiar, I am sure there is probably some very important reason for that, however I swear on my highest honor that this is "MY" personal account and true to the best of my ability to retell.
When things like this happen, you never forget, it is difficult to try and tell others in plain speech what has nothing plain or ordinary about it.
I have noticed at least one old poster with a new avie and membership date, yes you! Seems you watch for me to post stuff so that you can pull the same number, remember I fought and won with beings much more important than you.
We are almost done here, so please allow me to finish this telling.
*I always loved older guys*
The Gray Area is a discussion forum that provides a dedicated area for members to post their confessions, disclosures, and related extraordinary personal experiences. Like the highly speculative Skunk Works forum, The Gray Area will tolerate topics that may be unusually hypothetical or unproven for the purpose of vetting the stories of thread-starters by the ATS membership at large.
Originally posted by WickettheRabbit
Ok. I really wanted to start a thread in the Gray Area called
EWOKS Among Us!
but I decided that I couldn't waste that much time.
I wish that the Gray Area and the Fiction forums were combined since they are pretty much the same thing.
To the OP. I'm happy that you wrote out your story even if it has, I suspect, there are a lot of large embellishments. It's great practice for your writing. I would review your story...clean up a lot of the sections...and try again.
Thanks.
BEWARE OF THE EWOKS!
Originally posted by Praetorian Guard
Originally posted by gravykraken
Then who noticed?
you know... in order to relay that part? how does anyone know that the dark figure came up from a portal in the ground, on the side of the road?
[edit on 6/7/2009 by gravykraken]
This is one of those short stories. Just because it says, "This is a true story," doesn't mean it's a true story.
If the brothers didn't know the wee little man popped into this world through a portal, and she wasn't there to see it, then the story would simply be that she showed up at her boyfriend's apartment and there was this weird little leprechaun huddled in a corner.
Meh.
Originally posted by phi1618
im sure i will have many more questions for you once you finish it. In my head im picturing a silhouetted figure, all dark. Is this a proper way to think about it?
could You give any facial descriptions of the mans face?
Originally posted by mblahnikluver
Wow! I am waiting anxiously to read the rest.
Originally posted by LeTan
It sounds like a Djinn so far from reading what you wrote. He tried to entice you with earthly desires like he had done with your friends. What a worrying read so far of your encounter.
If you read the article, your encounter sounds a lot like a description of a mardāzmā, (tester of men). (quoted from the article)
[edit on 6-7-2009 by LeTan]
Originally posted by PRS395
I know where this is headed!, well, maybe not...
Eating popcorn waiting....
Originally posted by gravykraken
"As the two brothers were walking home from their job at the local casino, they did not notice as a small dark figure rose from the ground from deep within a portal on the side of the road."
then who noticed?
you know... in order to relay that part? how does anyone know that the dark figure came up from a portal in the ground, on the side of the road?
Originally posted by killuminati2012
Antar, I find this very interesting. Thanks for sharing. Do you feel like you've gained any insight into the relationship between the physical world and the spiritual world after this ordeal? Perhaps you have an idea of what role the physical world plays perhaps.
I've always felt like our physical reality is a huge restriction of some sort, preventing us from getting to something higher. Maybe the people that give-in to power and greed meet the same fate as the dark figure you encountered. What's your opinion?
Originally posted by seentoomuch
Hi Antar
Fascinating account, there is a part that is very similar to the tests that I went through. I'll wait to read the whole story before discussing it 'cause I don't want to divert you from finishing it.
STM
Originally posted by _Phoenix_
reply to post by antar
Why would you suddenly want a pee in that situation?
Anyway if this was true, I would not have listened to anything he says, I would say that all his threats are an illusion, that everything around you is to scare you into accepting his offer, and nothing bad will happen to you, that you and god has control over your soul. That is why he's so desperate to scare you into accepting, because he doesn't have control, you do.
Agreed, and as far as the pee thing, even as a little girl playing hide and seek, I always have to go pee when I get excited. Not in a weird way, but just something I have to do, like walking up to a fireworks stand, or a big store, or anyplace I know does not have one, lol.
But this does sound made up, even if it's true haha, I'm sure you know and expect that thou.
Oh yes, if it were not my experience I would keep an open mind, but alwayds have my doubts.