I swear I read this story somewhere before.. I just can't remember where? Anyway it's interesting.. I did have a friend once who said that he and his wife had over his best friend and his wife over for dinner.. Anyway he told me almost like he dreamed it.. that after they ate dinner a really weird mood hit the 4 of them.. He said within a minute or two the guys starting having sex with each other wives.. He told me it was almost like he and the other 3 weren't in control. It went on for over an hour when after it was done every one fell asleep. when he woke a couple hours later he really thought it was a dream but knew it wasn't because everyone was still naked.. Now the really strange part was the fact that no one Ever talked about it again, even between him and his wife.. He also stated the friendship wasn't strained between him and the other couple..I always wondered if what he said was true.. Although I don't know why anyone would lie about some other guy banging his wife.. Anyway your story reminds me of his.

Jeez this is becoming the penthouse forum posts..

I think the real Evil is the US Government!I would rather deal with the supernatural any day than those homicidal CIA & black op's nut jobs!

Originally posted by antar
I was 15 years old and quite mature for my age. I had a boyfriend at the time who was best friends with his twin brother and me of course.

1. I think you move pretty quick for a 15 year old.
2. I think you read too many Frank Peretti novels.
3. I think you could be a good story teller if you weren't telling a story that hasn't already been told countless times.

Sincrely,
Wiki

You guys are being too harsh. Hold your opinions till shes done or I doubt she will finish it.

S7

Obviously it's FICTIONAL.

There are too many errors for it to be real.
But it was entertaining.

As Angus points out -

Originally posted by Angus123
"As the two brothers were walking home from their job at the local casino, they did not notice as a small dark figure rose from the ground from deep within a portal on the side of the road. "

But... if they didn't notice it... who did notice it? How do you or anyone else know that it happened if they did not notice it?

AND .. when she asked the boyfriend who the dark man was the boyfriend said 'he followed us home' ... but how would he know that if 'they did not notice' that they were being followed earlier in the story?

Allegedly she was 15 at the time but her boy friends twin brother and her best friend had an apartment? Her boyfriend worked at a casino? The boyfriend, boyfriends brother, and best friend must have been MUCH older. If this were my daughter I certainly wouldn't be allowing for such activity from a 15 year old.

Nice fictional story.
It belongs in the short story section and not The Gray Area.

Antar, your a great writer.
Great post, this is why you are on my friends list.

Originally posted by antar
Jake answered grabbing me into his arms and laying a big long passionate kiss on my lips.

Hi antar,

With respect, as the boys wanted to get it on with you girls, is it possible with the long passionate kiss, that Jake may of had an acid trip he transferred to you while kissing you? Maybe yours and your friends drink was spiked? As all these experiences happened to you after that kiss.

Don't get me wrong, I certainly do believe in these other realms, but I am just trying to eliminate other possibilities.

Why would it be claimed as a true story than.

You all have pointed out enough inconsistencies to be a major cause for concern

If this story is supposed to be real, than OP please, before you go on any further

do us all the favor and address these inconsistencies

1) How did anyone know the guy came from a portal?

2) What age was your BF, you said he worked at a Casino but yet did not use an ID for booze

3) Be honest and admit what type of illegal drugs were there, i mean if there was kids having sex and drinking, i Know theres gotta be some drugs too...


But overall, forgive me because I consider this entire story a work of fiction, one with considerable loopholes.

Sigh...why would someone claim something was true when it was certainly not true...this is something I will never understand

Because I am a simple man, and to me the Truth is my simple answer in life. And i abhor fiction passed off as reality.

Don't get me wrong, I am open minded.

There is a .0001% chance your story is even half true. See , you have a chance.

Originally posted by DarksDeception
that Jake may of had an acid trip he transferred to you while kissing you? Maybe yours and your friends drink was spiked? As all these experiences happened to you after that kiss.

does not work

heres why

those drugs like that take 30min -45min before they even start to effect you on a level of serious hallucinations

and NO hallucinations are THIS vivid

Trust me, I know what they do.

Hallucinations are Visual Distortions (like moving carpet or melting walls)
They are NOT complete fabrications (purple elephant, leprechauns)

Originally posted by antar
Jake answered grabbing me into his arms and laying a big long passionate kiss on my lips.

Considering that you were allegedly 15 years old, and this boy friend allegedly worked at a casino (21 years old or older), then if this physical activity went any further it would be rape of a minor child.

yep Flyers good point

sounds to me like the "little dark man" was actually her BF

21yr olds kissing 15yr olds - totally disgusting and repulsive

I was 21! I did not go giving beer to kids to get them in bed. Its repulsive.

Happens all the time tho.

I await the rest of your story
But I do think you should answer the questions posed by the other members before continuing.

P.S to the SOME of the members who have posted on this thread. Why don't you wait till the end of the story before claiming it BS. There's no need to be so cruel and judgmental

Originally posted by Destroyed
There's no need to be so cruel and judgmental

I said was it was a entertaining and that it's obviously fiction.
That's not being cruel or judgemental on the writer.
This was publically posted as 'truth' ... so there are going to be
public comments back. That's just the way it works.

I didn't see any cruel comments.

The story teller is usually a very nice poster and enjoys lots of friends here.

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Originally posted by Elliot


I always had this problem believing these sex crazed other world stories because they lack the chemicals that drive sex drive.

Hmm interesting, but if they do exist, how do the reproduce? I would say they have sex, they are similar to humans in ways.

Originally posted by Molan27
I swear I read this story somewhere before.. I just can't remember where?

I also got that feeling, I swear I read this before feeling, Deja Vu.