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Originally posted by antar
reply to post by woodwardjnr
I never saw any of them again and as with my life, I moved shortly after that, or was sent to my Grandmas in So. Cal or something.
Originally posted by FunSized
Why does the evil being/person/whatever have to be little?! And of course the good being is tall. That is some sizist BS!
As a little person I'm very offended. And no that's not the only reason I'm calling BS on your story in general. As others have pointed out, how did you know that the 'little dark man' popped out of nowhere?
The only evil that walks among us is bigotry like OP's.
[edit on 7-7-2009 by FunSized]
[edit on 7-7-2009 by FunSized]
Originally posted by gravykraken
i'm not rying to be a stick in the mud. if this forum is somehow geared for fantasy i apologize. my bad.
even presented as fiction, the premise is flawed from the first person perspective. having not been there to witness the portal, the first person cannot accurately describe that event as true story.
i understand that sometimes (most of the time) the impact of a story is based on how grounded in reality it is. the easier it is to suspend disbelief the more close to home it feels. just by starting a tale with "true story" is a plot hook.
there has to be some bait on the hook you see...
Originally posted by ldyserenity
reply to post by TheMythLives
You said it...more and more people are being so rude. For lack of a better word. I happen to love the story and enjoy reading her TRUE account!