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The boo

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posted on Apr, 16 2014 @ 06:27 PM
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Who's to say that life can't have a clue?
The boo.
Who's to say that you can't research a fantasy?
The boo.
Read on...
Read on...
A discounted price for a discounted measure.
Save the measure!
An interesting book.
An old one.
Bound with leather.
And lather.
An intention for things meant now.
A realization of things cleared out.
Who's to say that you can't find a father?
A father to guide you...
To teach you your ways.
Old dates and old swings...
Rotting by the way.
In the daylight.
As a kid.
A pretense.
A path found many times.
And old apricots...
Lining the street.
One was Burbank.
But this was Mid-City.
A leaf with red trim.




posted on Apr, 16 2014 @ 06:30 PM
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I'm sorry for the too-rich symbolism. Don't say I didn't warn you.
I must have gone deep into my subconscious for this one. The key to getting it: don't look at it as something you have to understand, look at it as art.



posted on Apr, 16 2014 @ 07:15 PM
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reply to post by brazenalderpadrescorpio
 


Very nice!

I don't care what anyone says man, I truly enjoyed this! Keep up the good work.




posted on Apr, 16 2014 @ 07:28 PM
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reply to post by CagliostroTheGreat
 


Thanks, man! You're my most loyal fan. Hahaha.



posted on Apr, 16 2014 @ 07:45 PM
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I also like supporting the ATS writing community, especially those that lack the "writer" status.




posted on Apr, 16 2014 @ 08:04 PM
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Well you've definitely supported me. Thanks.



posted on Apr, 17 2014 @ 10:06 AM
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Well I sure enjoyed this one as well.
I'm really diggin the style of writing you have.

Thanks for sharing your work.



posted on Apr, 17 2014 @ 12:57 PM
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Thanks. I'm glad that at least a few people enjoyed it.



posted on Apr, 17 2014 @ 01:10 PM
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I liked that...thought it was neat.

I like rich symbolism!



posted on Apr, 17 2014 @ 02:34 PM
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Thanks for the compliment! That means a lot coming from you.



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