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posted on Feb, 16 2013 @ 02:49 PM
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Had a chance to glide over my stream of solitude.

Shattered pieces of my strength catch the wind briskly.

No backbone left in my delicate heart.

Time stands still.

Will this moment pass?

Death; will you step up your game?

In recent times, seems I have no name.

Gut wrenching thoughts float in my head.

My hearts being squished like a rotten tomato.

It's hard to breath or even see.

My brain injury inevitably makes it's quest.

Did not kill me, but won't let me rest.

Falling apart would be too simple.

Wings of a guardian....find me now.

-nat the mangled cat-
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edit on 16-2-2013 by natalia because: (no reason given)




posted on Feb, 16 2013 @ 03:22 PM
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Beautifully written my friend and the words touch very deeply indeed.

Souls cannot be devided and souls cannot suffer because it is something magic.. a creature that will wake up very soon.

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posted on Feb, 16 2013 @ 03:31 PM
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Thank you friend.

I changed the word soul...to strength....seems to fit better.

Thanks for the link as well, I'm off to read it now.

Peace and love
-nat the mangled cat-



posted on Feb, 16 2013 @ 04:24 PM
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Wow nat thats a really beautiful and deep piece of writing. Just seems to flow with you



posted on Feb, 16 2013 @ 04:37 PM
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I changed the word soul...to strength....seems to fit better.
Yes indeed "strength" fit better but in the same time the strength of a soul can reignite the light that once was the strength of Life.

Thank you for your beautiful words Natalia.

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posted on Feb, 16 2013 @ 04:39 PM
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As a writer myself, what you have here is very good. Some darkness in there, yet some hope... Very nice Natalia.



 
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posted on Feb, 16 2013 @ 04:40 PM
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As a writer myself, what you have here is very good. Some darkness in there, yet some hope... Very nice Natalia.



 
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posted on Feb, 16 2013 @ 04:44 PM
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As a writer myself, what you have here is very good. Some darkness in there, yet some hope... Very nice Natalia.



 
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posted on Mar, 1 2013 @ 02:14 PM
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Originally posted by natalia
Had a chance to glide over my stream of solitude.

Shattered pieces of my strength catch the wind briskly.

No backbone left in my delicate heart.

Time stands still.

Will this moment pass?

Death; will you step up your game?

In recent times, seems I have no name.

Gut wrenching thoughts float in my head.

My hearts being squished like a rotten tomato.

It's hard to breath or even see.

My brain injury inevitably makes it's quest.

Did not kill me, but won't let me rest.

Falling apart would be too simple.

Wings of a guardian....find me now.

-nat the mangled cat-
edit on 16-2-2013 by natalia because: (no reason given)
edit on 16-2-2013 by natalia because: (no reason given)


In my solitude I found my angel
His wings lifted me
Gave strength to my battered heart
Time held truth to see
The moment passed
Death my old friend to kind to take me
My new identity defies me
But sinks a fleet of doubt
The seeds of hope are released
Realization makes my breath hard to catch and truth blinds me
This new journey bemuses me but my angel will be there
I was strong and will defeat it
Falling apart would be too simple
Thank you angel for visiting


Close ?

Nice writing Nat I can't believe I didn't catch your writing before
Cody the thick idiot



posted on Mar, 1 2013 @ 02:33 PM
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You are not a 'thick idiot' at all friend!!

Your an awesome person and like I've said so nice and positive!!

See how awesomely positive you turned my poem into!! Absolutely lovely Cody!!!


Peace and love
~nat the blue eyed cat~



posted on Mar, 2 2013 @ 12:26 AM
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Thanks Nat
Thought you might be a bit angry with me for messing with it,
Should have u2u'd first bad form on my part but glad you liked it
Cody the dancing Tone
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