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Does anyone write songs ? heres mine

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posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:41 PM
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I think they all just got old
with dio gone and Ozzy walking dead. it it sad.
but im hard headed so go figure write. but I can write really any kind of lyric
I just put my self there and off I go !




posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:41 PM
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Wow, posting lyrics on a forum. If you want to keep them, I hope you hold a Copyright, otherwise, the good ones might end up on some bands CD someday, with no credit to the real author(s)....(that means no $ royalties). Yeah, people DO do that ya know.
edit on 11/30/2010 by MadDogtheHunter because: (no reason given)



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:43 PM
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Go for it !
aaaaaaaaaaggggghhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:45 PM
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Originally posted by BrainGarden
I think they all just got old
with dio gone and Ozzy walking dead. it it sad.


Plenty more out there man. I'm listening to Creeping Death right now. Many other decent 80's band. New ones too. I enjoy Slipknot. Here's a Canadian band you probably haven't heard:



Btw, I'll be 50 in a year and a half. I'm not a pup.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:46 PM
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Trust me, Its not my best
those are copyrighted.
the ones on here are for fun.
anyway money aint everything, Peace



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:48 PM
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heres my song,, uncle sam is screwin us,there's nothing we can do but take it up the but, even though its dry and it always makes you cry, he just keeps on jammin it in our but,,, TSA'S been molesting us,,, they also want to stick it in our but's and if you tell them no ,,in the back room you will go ,,and they will rape you in the back behind your nuts So far thats all i got but you get my point



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:49 PM
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Originally posted by intrepid

Originally posted by BrainGarden
I think they all just got old
with dio gone and Ozzy walking dead. it it sad.


Here's a Canadian band you probably haven't heard:


cant watch the video at work.. whats the band called.. im from canada....



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:49 PM
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I agree I wouldnt divulge to much in the open air.
I keep my lyrics and tunes between me and the guys in the band.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:51 PM
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Originally posted by machines4200
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there for you should NOT follow that... where did all the creativeness go off to.


Everyone's a critic....

Creativeness....man, all the licks have been played. There is nothing wrong with sticking with a tried and true musical form for a particular genera.

Creativity can come in the nuances, the subtleties and tuneings.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:51 PM
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Originally posted by machines4200
cant watch the video at work.. whats the band called.. im from canada....


Protest the Hero. The song is called Bloodmeat.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:52 PM
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yea the bands ok.. bad live and there pretty cocky.. booked em last year. off to home i go.


again myspace.com/thecoalitiondesign if you like metal...



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:53 PM
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Interesting. I can see by your writing your a closet homosexual who wants to be angry at the government because you have no idea what is going on around you



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:54 PM
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I see talk about Canada. To anyone who isn't familiar with Devin Townsend, please let yourself be enlightened by the man! Best thing to ever come from Canada in the music department, IMO.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:54 PM
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No band ,not yet
nobodys into metal in Rising sun In
bunch of wankers. thanks peeps
I have to wash my litteral ass-et.
be back soon ,



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:56 PM
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Originally posted by hillbilly4rent
reply to post by MadDogtheHunter
 

I agree I wouldnt divulge to much in the open air.
I keep my lyrics and tunes between me and the guys in the band.

Yep.

Even someones worse lyrics can be transformed in to something marketable.
Like the old saying, "Another mans trash, is another mans treasure".



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 06:04 PM
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Originally posted by amc621
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Interesting. I can see by your writing your a closet homosexual who wants to be angry at the government because you have no idea what is going on around you
Actually im just goofing around if you want to be serious dont get on above top secret,i know excactly whats going on with the country,people like you probably just attack anyone who doesnt agree with your self serving logic,oh and i am a homophobe there gross have you ever seen deliverence,i dont want that to happen when im camping hahahahahahaah



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 06:17 PM
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Originally posted by MadDogtheHunter

Originally posted by hillbilly4rent
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I agree I wouldnt divulge to much in the open air.
I keep my lyrics and tunes between me and the guys in the band.

Yep.

Even someones worse lyrics can be transformed in to something marketable.
Like the old saying, "Another mans trash, is another mans treasure".
Like I said it's all fun.
I'd squirt all over every thing If I heard my words some day.wow.
And I look at it like "Bait" My mind screams this stuff 24/7/365
If you got a killer band but no lyrics, then I'm your man.
The BrainGarden.then it's $$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

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posted on Dec, 1 2010 @ 03:52 AM
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Great song. It's one that can reach to people.



posted on Dec, 1 2010 @ 04:49 AM
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Well, from reading your first post, that's not a song, it's just the lyrics, which makes it more of a poem. Couldn't you post a link to a recording of it?

By the way, if you read the lyrics of most popular songs, without hearing the music, most of them just come off like baby talk gibberish, hardly saying anything of substance at all. Good lyrics are more than one dimensional - they alliterate to something other than they are literally saying. Usually the first line pulls you in - and leads you to the Chorus. Many times the last line puts a twist on things which either (in good writing) ties up the story line, or puts a twist on things, making the Chorus surprise you with taking on a new meaning.

I like the way your words (I guess...) use symbolism to make the dragon represent alcohol.



posted on Dec, 1 2010 @ 05:10 AM
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Thanks, Warza.
I do not play very well, just enough to chunk,chunk a basic beat I Guess.
I just get a thought and go and go with it.
That one took about 12 minutes.
Like mentioned before, I'm just having fun here.
It popped into my head and I scribbled down.(maybe, I should spend more time on the Flow)!
It's my first thread ever ! so forgive me if it doesnt
flow well. But, thanks for the compliment.
Peace.



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