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Does anyone write songs ? heres mine

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posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 04:45 PM
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The Dragon

Drifting along this river
of my yesterdays,
The Yellow mocks me
through the haze.

Lingering unanswered questions
threaten to pull me down,
into the churning depths
of painful memories.

That familiar empty feeling
just before the dragon comes,
I bite my lip, fight back the tears
and draw my prideful sword.

By a flick of the wrist
and a delicate touch,
I raise my sword in the air
and this battle has begun.

With a practiced patience
and the grace of a master,
I slowly drink it down
and that old Dragon has been slain.

I battle spirits every day
out on the cliff, but I wont fall,
I draw my prideful sword
slay the Dragon,and have five more
I'm on the frontline every day.

The BrainGarden.
This song is about alcoholism and past mistakes in the past in Heavy-Metal format.

edit on 30-11-2010 by BrainGarden because: spelling !

edit on 30-11-2010 by BrainGarden because: clarification




posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 04:53 PM
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reply to post by BrainGarden
 


depends what kinda music its ment for... dont wanna say its cheesy but it is kinda emo-ish. whats the dragon supposed to represent?



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:09 PM
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reply to post by machines4200
 

It's about drinking too mucch and dealing with the past . and Its Metal
thanks man.
The BrainGarden.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:14 PM
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Good lyrics for metal! I was confused reading it because it is in the paranomal forum. I use to write poems and lyrics - got away from it some years ago.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:15 PM
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well just to show that i know what metal is.. heres my old band... drummers in P.E.I now but the stuffs solid.

www.myspace.com/thecoalitiondesign

im on guitar.

I would still deffinatly suggest a few different things in the way you write but its a start.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:16 PM
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reply to post by crazydaisy
 

I have no ideal how to post in right place, )1st post.
thanks man
cool .The BrainGarden.
edit on 30-11-2010 by BrainGarden because: to add reply



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:17 PM
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reply to post by BrainGarden
 


very nice lyrics, and I'm glad you explained them afterwards, I think my mind is overly perverted,



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:19 PM
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...i like the lyrics... could ya post the chords, puleeze...



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:19 PM
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How do i go about putting it where it belongs?



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:20 PM
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I just do the
lyrics man , but thank you .



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:23 PM
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Here is my song about my dog

King went a-runnin' after deer
Wasn't scared of jumpin' off the truck in high gear
King went a-sniffin' and he would go
Was the best old hound dog I ever did know.

I had a dog and his name was King
I told the dog about everything
There in my truck the dog and I
Then one day the King up and died.

Then I thought about the times we had
Once when I kicked him when he was bad
Old King sure meant a lot to me
But that hound dog is history.

King went a-runnin' after deer
Wasn't scared of jumpin' off the truck in high gear
King went a-sniffin' and he would go
Was the best old hound dog I ever did know

That old King was a friend of mine
Never knew a dog that was half as fine
I may find one, you never do know
'Cause I still got a long way to go.

I had a dog and his name was King
I told the dog about everything
Old King sure meant a lot to me
But that hound dog is history.

King went a-howlin' after deer
Wasn't scared of jumpin' off the truck in high gear
King went a-sniffin' and he would go
Was the best old hound dog I ever did know.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:23 PM
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Originally posted by BrainGarden
reply to post by crazydaisy
 

I have no ideal how to post in right place, )1st post.
thanks man
cool .The BrainGarden.
edit on 30-11-2010 by BrainGarden because: to add reply


Lyrics and literary stuff go here......

www.abovetopsecret.com...



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:24 PM
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I will check out your band man.
hey that rhymed !



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:25 PM
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now how do i move this mods help?



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:26 PM
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Originally posted by BrainGarden
now how do i move this mods help?


Already done. masqua moved it to Short Stories. You should have a PM telling you about the move.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:28 PM
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Originally posted by Wyn Hawks
...i like the lyrics... could ya post the chords, puleeze...


Drop D tunedown of course

Most metal follows this config. Em, C, G, D

I think you will find this progression works will with this lyric form.

Em C
Drifting along this river
G D
of my yesterdays,
Em C
The Yellow mocks me
G D
through the haze.

this program should have placed the C and D over the ending word in the phrase...



and for a possible bridge/chorus lick...

Am, F, C, G and from this G, walk back down to the Em........standard metal....plenty of distortion and chorus
edit on 30-11-2010 by whaaa because: (no reason given)



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:32 PM
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THATS METAL!
\../



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:35 PM
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there for you should NOT follow that... where did all the creativeness go off to.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:36 PM
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Great song about your dog man.



posted on Nov, 30 2010 @ 05:38 PM
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METAL!


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