posted on Nov, 9 2007 @ 05:12 PM
I like it, but if I may offer some criticism...
Push that voice. You got a voice unlike some of us, you got it, but get passionate about it.
I know it sounds generic, but use the diaphragm. build it up, and spit it out.
Make that sound come from down where the fires got ya, and not your throat.
I know the sound your after, but it sounds like your too quiet, which can be mistaken for monotone, which I can tell your not.
Keep up the good work.