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posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 07:54 AM
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Darkness falls,
all is grey;
unbeknownst to me,
a heartless play.

Blackened waters,
horizon night;
there was no sign,
save but a light.

Faded in the distance long,
a glint of hope;
tis all was shown,
towards the misted sorrow road.

Of fallen leaves,
nothing shorn;
death defying,
over throws.

An open door,
tattered and torn;
calling me,
into it's lorn... or so I thought.

And as I neared,
this hidden gem;
my eyes lit up,
I began to run.

I glimpsed behind me,
ghosts of past;
bloodied angry
twisted souls.

Free I was now,
no more pain;
the door of hope
brought me back again.

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πŸ“

edit on 8/31/2016 by awareness10 because: be kind




posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 08:03 AM
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posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 09:05 AM
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Or being awake (aware) is having a light shining on your path so you can 'see' and keep from stumbling in the dark.



posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 09:10 AM
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a reply to: intrptr

Yes... this was based on a past filled with evil driven people tripping up those who are good, only finding freedom once becoming aware that the path even existed.. Those who are tired of bullies, tend to wake up much faster to their games and in that, being able to find their true power within and use it. Sometimes.. that path is another likened soul that lifts you out of the mire to a world filled with beauty, the world within.



glad you liked it!
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posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 09:49 AM
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a reply to: awareness10

Your poems are really deep and your writing is amazing!πŸ“
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posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 10:09 AM
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a reply to: awareness10

Keep on towards that yonder light.



posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 01:40 PM
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a reply to: awareness10



The Awakening...

Staring over love eyes of time found you,
Your future tossed the past far away,
Time stands still in your name,
The awareness of 10 opened my eyes,
Away we march beating as one,
Memories times thoughts = 10,
Warm lips of love kiss away in the night,
The city of light keeps us here,
Every moment we grow,
The moon shapes our name,
Who are you I ask as I awake from within...πŸ“
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posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 01:42 PM
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It just happened to double this post lol.
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posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 02:22 PM
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a reply to: intrptr

I'm already there




posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 02:23 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Beautiful I love this thankyou so much πŸ“



posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 02:24 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

It was You and your poetic mind that inspired me to keep writing, now I cannot stop πŸ“



posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 02:29 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Your mind is amazing, never stop writing. You are so aware...πŸ“



posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 02:32 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

We've got more later ... another story πŸ“



posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 02:34 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Yes will will write another story together later for sure...πŸ‘…



posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 07:24 PM
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Nice poem :-)



posted on Aug, 31 2016 @ 09:28 PM
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a reply to: DarkvsLight29

Thankyou..




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