"The White People" [HHWC]

reply to post by ldyserenity


Thank you Ldy! I dig the new avatar too! Didn't see an entry from you... did I miss it? Off to search the page for it.

I liked it. a bit scary hope u win the contest.

reply to post by christinaV


Thank you Christina! I am so happy you enjoyed it.

Wow. good story! I had the chills there for a second.
I also am *trying* to write a story for this contest, But its not going so well. lol.Hopefully i can get it all together and make it sound 1/2 as good as this one!
I really think yours is good and deserves to place out of the entries so far.

reply to post by toolstarr


Thank you so much! I truly appreciate that.

I look forward to reading your entry. Get it in quick! Ends soon! Good luck to you!

Just getting around to enjoying some of the short stories tonight, perfect really, just like your story. had me a bit scared for a bit...

reply to post by antar


Thank you Antar! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Scary story!

very good write
enjoyed it immensely
such talent within

reply to post by Salenai


I hope you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading.

reply to post by boondock-saint


Thank you so much Boondock! I truly appreciate that!

That image of the hooded figures really gives me the chills. You've written one very spooky story - the kind I like best. Thanks for submitting it.

reply to post by Flatwoods


Thank you so much for reading and commenting. So happy it touched something in you and that you apparently enjoyed it. That made my day!

Looks like yet another writer will be giving me a run for my money...

Compared to some of these stories, yours definitely included, my story seems... inadequate.

Way to make me feel inadequate

I just read yours and I disagree. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying this!

reply to post by Ceriddwen


It's a good story for a rainy night like this. I have to admit I got a chill that wouldn't go away throughout the last paragraph (I did peek out my window)
SnF for you

Thank you so much Tribble! I am glad you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the story.

Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Had me riveted all the way.

I think it might be good idea for ATS to publish a book of stories written by people on the site.

The standard of everything I've read so far is really high in my opinion.

Might have a go myself at some point..........

reply to post by Illegal Alien


Thank you so much Illegal! I truly appreciate it.

reply to post by Ceriddwen


Thanks. Good one - kept me reading to find out what happened!

S&F