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posted on Dec, 1 2012 @ 11:45 PM
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My angel wings are broken, they need to be mended,

the winds of change have blown me around and left me unattended,

I wonder if you have the time, to stop and give me attention,

I promise the love you show will not go without mention,

if I am left to fend for myself, I fear the falling off the shelf,

the edge is perilously close and the fall from my perch is at hand,

do not push me... no do not push me,

mend me, love me give me a hand,

keep me from going over the cliff and tumbling over and over into the abyss,

it's a long way to fall for I can not fly, why why why...do not ask why...

the time is at hand, I want to take you with me far from this land,

bandage me and give me your love, so instead of below, we can rise above.

BAW33




posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 12:12 AM
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posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 12:17 AM
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reply to post by BrokenAngelWings33
 


I like it, Symbolizes love between a male & female where the female is the one who is expressing herself towards the male?



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 02:46 AM
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Read that and wondered why birds dont get given repair kits. What repairs do ypou need?



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 09:25 AM
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reply to post by BrokenAngelWings33
 


A big old hug and a fully stocked first aid kit to you BAW33!



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 09:45 AM
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reply to post by littled16
 


Thanks littled. Just curious...how did you interpret what I wrote here?



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 09:47 AM
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reply to post by FeelingPure
 


That could be one interpretation...depends...I will explain at some point, I just want to see what people read it to mean.



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 09:48 AM
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reply to post by winofiend
 


Hey wino, do you have a synopsis available of what you think this poem means?



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 09:48 AM
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reply to post by BrokenAngelWings33
 


I interpret it as your heart has been broken and you need a friend to lean on, but I could be mistaken. What is your interpretation Author?



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 09:49 AM
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reply to post by AthlonSavage
 


What repairs do you think I need? And who am I actually referring to in this poem? What is your perception...analysis?



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 09:54 AM
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Explanation: S&F!



Personal Disclosure: I felt the need to dissect this poem deeply ... but instead I am just going to give it a hail mary!


Be Well Comrade!



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 10:21 AM
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reply to post by OmegaLogos
 


Thank you, but please do dissect, I want perception...perspective...analysis...



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 10:23 AM
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reply to post by littled16
 


I will reveal...soon enough.



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 02:03 PM
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What repairs do you think I need? And who am I actually referring to in this poem? What is your perception...analysis?


Poems are not always wasy to interpret, and is made more difficult because you could of written it as third person. You may be referring to a loved one, or someone dear to you and asking to mend a bridge. There is an uneasiest in your spirit. This unrest has reduced your energy levels of which needs to be restored. The other person you are referring to is the key to your healing a fracture within your spirit. Am I close?



posted on Dec, 2 2012 @ 02:19 PM
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I will let you know soon enough...thanks for your reply.



posted on Dec, 3 2012 @ 01:16 AM
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reply to post by BrokenAngelWings33
 


Whether i am close or not its very good poetry.



posted on Dec, 3 2012 @ 01:25 AM
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Originally posted by AthlonSavage
reply to post by BrokenAngelWings33
 


Whether i am close or not its very good poetry.


Blushing...flattery will get you no where, thanks...it was a poem that came to me in about a 45 second flash and a hint for you it's not what you think...look deeper...



posted on Dec, 3 2012 @ 01:29 AM
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Look deeper..here i go down the rabbit hole again



posted on Dec, 3 2012 @ 04:17 PM
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My poem has to do with the Earth itself...raising the consciousness collectively of the souls that reside here to a level of harmony, so that I the Earth can rise above the hatred and enter a new dimension, filled with love and peace.



posted on Dec, 3 2012 @ 04:21 PM
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Okay, so the Earth has a broken heart and needs all of humanity to come together as one to heal her spirit.





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