Hey man , really good stuff !

you clearly put alot of time into it , I like the way you introduce characters , the dialogue is really good as well.
I would suggest editing these on adobe illustrator , you can place text into the speech bubbles , find a typeface that you think is suitable and easy to read.

I like your style man , you show promise !
keep going again and again sketch sketch sketch
I love sketching!

Now that you have completed it do it again
this time once your done ink it and it will really come to life !

Also if your looking for some influence about the future and magic, then check out masamune shirow - appleseed , ghost in the shell, Orion my three favourite manga

I like Warren.


You have a nice theme goin' there. Fun concept. Great character creation. Nice drawing and good continuity of the characters in various panels. (So tricky to do!) Very nice panels and lines. The fights are fun and it's intriguing to see where you're going to take this.

You might advance the date a coupla hundred + years. I think it's funny how often we see "futuristic" movies and plots placed not too far in the distant future, yet everything is radically different. To me, that seems to just work for apocalyptic tales as everything just has to be destroyed. In your scenario, you have over a billion humans and 3 times as many (heavily varied) aliens in a seemingly developed society on Mars where we are just now scraping some dirt remotely. A great deal happened in those 200 years and we, as a society, haven't even worked out multiple cultures and races of our own genus today. Technology-wise, we're growing like wildfire, but it takes a lot of time, money and effort to implement the newfangled physical buildings and infrastructure on Earth. You have Mars fully developed there.

Also, it's time for new cover art. It comes off a little stiff. You've improved notably in your skills and are ready.

I LOVE it, very creative (I also love going to Comic Con, so...). My son used to do a lot of amazing drawings and I hope he puts it to good use and takes it up again like you have. He keeps starting comics, but then gives up, but he's not yet even 15, so there's time.

I really enjoy your cast of characters, that kind of thing always interests me - I really enjoy Sci-Fi movies or shows where they have all these alien creatures, seeing others' imagination at work always pleases me, being an artist myself and really into creating and enjoying what others are doing, also. Can never have too many new creatures, haha. Not into it in real life, just fantasy - not into all that weird stuff they are doing in those secret underground facilities, if you know what I mean - twisted.

I also like the way you have it laid-out, not too confusing. I do have a bit of advice as far as spelling and grammar - have someone really good, like an English teacher, go over your work and do any corrections before you finalize. Words such as truly (not truely), and you're (you are - rather than your) could be corrected. Those details will give your comic more polish. Not trying to be the spelling troll, just thought I'd give you advice. I'm a born proofreader, but I don't use it to bash anyone - wonderful work - keep it up.

Very talented. You should go for it. The curse words won't fly with publishers so you may as well change it yourself or they will and you won't have control over it. The hero is a bit too cute for my taste, since he is a killer/warrior maybe make him handsome but with some character befitting a real warrior. A scar, bit more chiseled face? The sword in the time period you ascribe should have magical powers i would think, otherwise it is not believable for the time period. I liked it. I assume you are looking for critique so there ya go. There is no doubt you have talent. Stay at it and good luck!