posted on Oct, 26 2012 @ 01:38 PM
Originally posted by WielderOfTheSwordOfTruth
reply to post by NarcolepticBuddha
Thanks for everything you said, the critiques are helpful, one thing though, what do you mean keep out 4 letter words??
Every time the characters say "sh**" it just doesn't seem to fit the environment. I understand newer comics are getting edgier and edgier. But, while
trying to strive for some realism, don't overlook the fact that it's out of place to use western-style language/slang in a comic set in futuristic
I don't know, it's probably just a personal pet peeve of mine. I can't help but imagine there'd be some new, bad language and slang being said. Don't
forget to invent some futuristic words, slang, and phrases. This is something shows like Futurama have done very well and I think it's very effective
(speaking as a fan of comics, cartoons etc.)
Only a personal suggestion, of course. I'm certainly not an editor. But, I like to keep the dialogue timeless and real at the same time, which is no
easy task sometimes.
edit on 26-10-2012 by NarcolepticBuddha because: (no reason given)