Originally posted by hangedman13
Beez that was Lucky strikes and clean living Sounded so pulpy, it's great!

I'm glad someone caught that!

Thanks for reading it!

Originally posted by beezzer
This was so fun to write, there might be more Bren Dover and Captain Hero!

Thanks for reading it!

My Favorites have always been names like

Chuck Chiselchest
Bobby Burbank
Howy Hollywood
Bob Beefcake

Originally posted by Rubicant13

Originally posted by beezzer

Originally posted by SLAYER69

Originally posted by beezzer
Police Chief O’Malley then came up to Captain Hero (!) and Bren and asked, “Golly Cap, how do you do it?”

Captain Hero (!) pulled out a hip flask and tossed back a couple fingers of scotch, lit another Lucky Strike and said, “Clean living.”

The End.

Or is it?

I hate Cliff hangers!

More please
S&F

This was so fun to write, there might be more Bren Dover and Captain Hero!

Thanks for reading it!

Great story, Beezer. I like the name "Captain Hero" It's cool is funny at the same time, avoiding other cliche super hero names.

I wanted campy, cheesy, dorky. Thanks for reading it!

Originally posted by SLAYER69

Originally posted by beezzer
This was so fun to write, there might be more Bren Dover and Captain Hero!

Thanks for reading it!

My Favorites have always been names like

Chuck Chiselchest
Bob Beefcake
Rob Rock

Maybe I could do a Beezzer Freemley and Nick Steeljaw (aka) Captain Hero story.

Although Bren Dover was inspired by Bond movies.

Sleezy and cheesy! Time warp back to the 50's.

Originally posted by Iamschist
Sleezy and cheesy! Time warp back to the 50's.

Sleezy and cheesy are also two of the first words on my resume.




Thanks for reading it.