temps : about a time traveler, page 2
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reply posted on 24-8-2009 @ 07:39 PM by letthereaderunderstand
reply to post by readerone



Infinity in sync,
all quantumlly linked,
all variables verifibily put forth.

E = M giving us friends,
time two C twice though
opposite as south and north.

Now that one standing up,
Still one on its side,
east and west,
all circumstantial divide
to see the secret
we see in the ark
the golden arched M
phonetics voice E at its start.

See the 2 c's turned oppositely,
sitting upon the Sarah Fem,
the M two poles control
with its balance of souls,
so tad poles
may roam end to end.

A silicon valley,
supporting the contents,
the windows that the apple provides,
which we were told not and quickly forgot,
the matter of time before they collide.

The lungs and the heart,
the Y and it's part,
the top we wobble the earth.
The vanishing point,
and place men anoint,
cleaves heaven
to show us our birth.

And as the whirl turns,
in silvery circular pearls
every one seeks wood to contain,
it's hand over fist,
the paper won't miss,
cause when stone is seen,
scissors can't reign.

All the symbolic
hypnotically synaptic language,
never needed a word to tether it so scaling it down,

It caused the wind uttering
to current salty oceans,
riptiding the energy
known as emotions,
under a globe hemi
no dodge ram could pull in,
when burning the ram,
we threw all the gold in,
so now we're golden treasure
light that's been folding

So now o random matter,
subtracting the adder,
the snake that twists up the pole,
the ancestors voice,
speaking tongues that hate or rejoice,
begging relatives to break the this mold.

Drinking me in
cups toasting to sin
pouring me out
a spiket forced in my side

Reasons of seasons
voices speak speaking,
in the ears of their heir,
will you die?

And all this must happen
as it has happened
or no life would be at all

E equaling M
90 degrees of friend
to double the C
and have life

to remember me
when you come to your kingdom
"Today...you will be with me
in everlasting paradise"


reply posted on 28-8-2009 @ 08:01 PM by jackflap
reply to post by readerone



I did check this out as I was intrigued with your story for the contest. This is very long readerone, and admittedly I skipped some stuff. If you could compartmentalize some of this it would make for an easier read. I liked it though. I can tell you are a machinist, no? I am fond of this trade and I like the challenges it presents. Star and flagged. I enjoyed what I did take in and will re-visit this soon. Thank you for referring me to this story of yours I enjoyed the experience.


reply posted on 28-8-2009 @ 08:50 PM by readerone
reply to post by jackflap



what you need from this is simple :

in 1988 I converted a story from FAT-16 to FAT-32

it was all in a single text file , 4gig... when I made the conversion ... I lost the whole thing .

at frist read it took about a year to completely read .

about 8 times the lenght of the standard bible .

in it I explored reality , physics and time

I divided temporal paradox in to 9 main catagorys .

and gave about 10 kinds of time travel methods .

I showed how to spot time travel artifacts , and made a very compelling case for everything being explain'd as either directly or indirectly being related to future human time travel , or next evolution to earth time travelers .

what you are reading is a treatment of the story .

as a work of fiction , the origanal was a collection of about 200 storys a bit longer that 200,ooo words each .

temps explored past , present and about six diffrent area's of the future .

I suspect I have a good grasp of time travel .

but have a few problems explaining in a few words what is in my meaning


reply posted on 28-8-2009 @ 09:27 PM by jackflap
reply to post by readerone



Sounds really cool. I for one know that theoretically time travel is possible. The government may have already done and is doing this. Who knows, it is just my thoughts and fuel for a future story. No pun intended. I like what you are exploring here friend and wish you luck with it.
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