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A Sliver of Bone in the Soul

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posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 08:50 AM
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My hatred sustains me
Fills that gnawing void
The one you made,
Then filled, then left,

Bereft.

I lie, broken and bloody
The floor aching through my splintered
Fractured form.
No light down here

No light

The weight of your existence suffocates
Always there, always pressing down
If I hadn't known you who would I be now?
If I hadn't known you who would you

Be?


Nothing safe save my pain
Fits me so well, naked without it.
Close my eyes and live again
Hating, hurting living

Hell

Time has passed and here I am
Hating the loss
That was no loss
Healing never ends

Ever




posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 08:51 AM
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a reply to: SprocketUK

Nice and dark, I like it!



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 08:54 AM
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a reply to: NwoDedispU

Thanks





posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 09:00 AM
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Abolish self-loathing. Take a step into the light and look behind you. There it lays. Defeated.



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 09:03 AM
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originally posted by: angeldoll
Abolish self-loathing. Take a step into the light and look behind you. There it lays. Defeated.


That would look good above a doorway



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 09:10 AM
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originally posted by: SprocketUK

originally posted by: angeldoll
Abolish self-loathing. Take a step into the light and look behind you. There it lays. Defeated.


That would look good above a doorway



lol! Only you would have thought of that!



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 09:15 AM
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originally posted by: angeldoll

originally posted by: SprocketUK

originally posted by: angeldoll
Abolish self-loathing. Take a step into the light and look behind you. There it lays. Defeated.


That would look good above a doorway



lol! Only you would have thought of that!


That made me smile



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 09:16 AM
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a reply to: SprocketUK

Yes. Yes indeed, friend.



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 09:21 AM
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a reply to: TarzanBeta






posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 10:24 AM
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a reply to: SprocketUK

Very dark bro, me like!



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 01:40 PM
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a reply to: FauxMulder

Thanks. Yeah, dark was where I was going there.



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 03:43 PM
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a reply to: SprocketUK

it's dark, but not dark enough make it darker!



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 03:48 PM
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originally posted by: Neith
a reply to: SprocketUK

it's dark, but not dark enough make it darker!


Just for you I'll try and write one about a black cat in a coal mine.




posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 07:02 PM
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originally posted by: SprocketUK

originally posted by: Neith
a reply to: SprocketUK

it's dark, but not dark enough make it darker!


Just for you I'll try and write one about a black cat in a coal mine.



Purrrfect! lol. Make it a magic cat in a coal mine filled with mice.



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 07:18 PM
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originally posted by: Neith

originally posted by: SprocketUK

originally posted by: Neith
a reply to: SprocketUK

it's dark, but not dark enough make it darker!


Just for you I'll try and write one about a black cat in a coal mine.



Purrrfect! lol. Make it a magic cat in a coal mine filled with mice.


I don't think I could actually make that a dark one.
Unless written from the perspective of the mice perhaps.



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 07:41 PM
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originally posted by: SprocketUK

originally posted by: Neith

originally posted by: SprocketUK

originally posted by: Neith
a reply to: SprocketUK

it's dark, but not dark enough make it darker!


Just for you I'll try and write one about a black cat in a coal mine.



Purrrfect! lol. Make it a magic cat in a coal mine filled with mice.


I don't think I could actually make that a dark one.
Unless written from the perspective of the mice perhaps.


Now imagine the mice witness a glitch in the matrix.

O.o



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 07:49 PM
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originally posted by: TarzanBeta

originally posted by: SprocketUK

originally posted by: Neith

originally posted by: SprocketUK

originally posted by: Neith
a reply to: SprocketUK

it's dark, but not dark enough make it darker!


Just for you I'll try and write one about a black cat in a coal mine.



Purrrfect! lol. Make it a magic cat in a coal mine filled with mice.


I don't think I could actually make that a dark one.
Unless written from the perspective of the mice perhaps.


Now imagine the mice witness a glitch in the matrix.

O.o



I am gonna have to give this some thought now



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 08:13 PM
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a reply to: SprocketUK

The animal farm - The Other Version.



posted on Mar, 23 2017 @ 08:14 PM
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a reply to: TarzanBeta

mice from the planet matronix, attempt to take over Planet Earth. Part 1.

They use their ability to rip holes in space and time to further their wishes to rule Mankind and their ability to ....
edit on 23-3-2017 by Neith because: (no reason given)



posted on Mar, 25 2017 @ 01:35 PM
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a reply to: Neith

I reckon you should pick up this particular ball and run with it




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