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Payday [YJA2017]

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posted on Mar, 3 2017 @ 12:32 AM
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I have to admit, I really liked this. Great beginning with a fantastic ending! I predict you win this one in the non-writer category. Kudos Jinmi, S&F. There are some great writers here.




posted on Mar, 3 2017 @ 06:53 AM
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a reply to: JinMI

Nicely done Jin!




posted on Mar, 3 2017 @ 07:02 PM
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a reply to: FauxMulder

Thanks Faux! I appreciate it.



posted on Mar, 3 2017 @ 11:57 PM
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a reply to: Wookiep

Thanks Wook, I appreciate it!



posted on Mar, 4 2017 @ 11:40 AM
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Good read! I'm all for anything that deals with religious myth, and you have incorporated into a modern setting very nicely. S & F! Good work.



posted on Mar, 6 2017 @ 06:56 AM
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originally posted by: JayDub113
Good read! I'm all for anything that deals with religious myth, and you have incorporated into a modern setting very nicely. S & F! Good work.


Thanks JayDub, I appreciate it!




posted on Mar, 9 2017 @ 11:36 AM
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Well that was fun!

Good job Jin! Loved the ending.



posted on Mar, 9 2017 @ 12:05 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

I like the theme!




posted on Mar, 9 2017 @ 11:08 PM
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Thanks Sprocket and Prairie! Appreciate it and glad you guys enjoyed it.



posted on Mar, 15 2017 @ 07:17 PM
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posted on Mar, 19 2017 @ 02:52 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

Very nice and great writing. I am surprised to say I enjoyed it lol



posted on Mar, 20 2017 @ 08:57 PM
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originally posted by: PageLC14
a reply to: JinMI

Very nice and great writing. I am surprised to say I enjoyed it lol


Glad you enjoyed it. Curious as to why your surprised you enjoyed it.



posted on Mar, 20 2017 @ 10:16 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

Ummm. Let's just say it's never a good idea to hold onto first impressions made over the internet lol



posted on Mar, 20 2017 @ 10:33 PM
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originally posted by: PageLC14
a reply to: JinMI

Ummm. Let's just say it's never a good idea to hold onto first impressions made over the internet lol


Good idea!



posted on Mar, 30 2017 @ 03:48 AM
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originally posted by: peppycat
a reply to: JinMI

marking for to find simple later next week.


Well, last day Peppy!



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