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What Brought You Here?

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posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 06:02 PM
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I can not fathom the vastness of space.
Time and reality distorted and displaced.

What I know, I've read in books.
Seen the movements of pawns and rooks.

A glint in a philosophers eye.
A speck of dust thrown up high.

It will fall with certain force.
No one can measure it's eventual course.

We live within that speck of dust.
History changes with errant lust.

The road to this moment, has it been fate.
Or are we the victim of some others mistake.

I believe there is and artistry at work.
It leaves me with bewilderment and a smirk.

Look within or to others with a leer,
But in the end, what has brought you here?




posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 06:12 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

No words, but a simple 👍



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 06:14 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

I love this!! The imagery you've used to convey just how small we are in comparison to our existance around us, and how vague it all is, forever changing. Leaving us with just enough child like awe to smile at it all in wonder.

Beautiful Writing



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 06:14 PM
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a reply to: Bigburgh

Tankya sir.

I saw your musician post and hope you get better soon. No better way to heal that to put your creative skills to work and soak up others outlets as well.



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 06:15 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

Damn your good! I was actually thinking some of the words veered off the path I was trying to walk down.



to you for getting it!



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 06:17 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

Stories brought me here.. In this place, its about going where no man has gone before..

oh yeah, Start Trek!



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 06:22 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

Why thankyou kind sir. Your writing is perfect!

We should try writing something with Quantum some time, he mentioned wanting to, one big happy crazy poem to see what we come up with.




posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 06:25 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

That's a great idea!

Have you ever read/seen the stores where some event happens between 3 or more people, and they are to write about what led up to and during the said event?

Getting all those different perspectives is something very neat.



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 06:32 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

Yes i have, i think it would be really fun for sure.

It may just end up being a Master Piece!



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 07:12 PM
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* i enjoyed reading this! its very well written.



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 07:13 PM
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a reply to: kilig
Thank you for the kind words.

Your avatar picture is amazing btw!



posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 08:12 PM
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a reply to: JinMI

I don't think that I can add anything that hasn't already been said.

I just wanted to let you know of another person who enjoyed it.




posted on Aug, 8 2016 @ 08:23 PM
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a reply to: TNMockingbird

Thankya TN.





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