So, you like writing stories? And you'd like to write better ones? Then you've come to the right page. Anyone can write a story, but writing a good
one is not so easy. Writing my novel, The King Herself, is the hardest thing I've ever done in my life. Mind you, I've never climbed Mount Everest. Or
had kids. But writing that book gave me immense satisfaction, and along the way I learnt a lot about the writing craft. And that's what this page is
all about.When I was in primary school, like you, I wrote my first stories. One I wrote in year 4 (then called 2nd year Juniors) was in three
chapters. It was called Fun in Moominland, and it was all about the Moomins, who are characters created by Tove Jannson, featured in 8 books. The
teacher read my story to the class, and that was my proudest moment as an author so far. Perhaps it was also the seed which led me to start writing
The King Herself 25 years later.So it's good to start young. Now's the time to get a taste for writing - to fall in love with it, learn some tips
from your teachers, and from my web page, and write your own great tales. Who knows, maybe one day you'll be penning your own novel, and watching
people grab it off the shelves of your local bookshop.1. Don't Bore Your Reader!The worst thing a book can do is bore you. It's okay if it terrifies
you, or even makes you depressed (some people like that), but if it bores you, you'll chuck it away. Unless your teacher is making you read it. So
whatever you do, when you write a story, make sure it isn't boring! Easy to say, but how do you make a story non-boring? Here's the essence of it:
create a main character the reader will care about, and give them a problem or mystery to solve.If the characters are dull or annoying, without
anything to like about them, the reader will get very fed up. Even your bad guys should have something interesting about them (Voldemort was at
Hogwarts, for example)If the character has a nice, easy life, everything is hunky dory, no problem, the reader will fall asleep. To spice things up
for the reader there should be some some sort of conflict, a difficulty with someone (a bully, evil wizard, monster, annoying brother, parents) or
something (the sea, a desert,loneliness, an approaching asteroid, time running out).If there is no question the reader wants to know the answer to, he
or she will die of boredom. You must keep your reader guessing - wanting to know what will happen next, what the answer to the big puzzle is.
Whodunnit? Will the hero save the city? Find the treasure? Kill the monster? Win the girl's heart?This is one reason why JK Rowling is richer than the
Queen. She is brilliant at making sure the reader is always trying to work out what on earth is going on. You can't put her books down because there's
always some mystery to be answered.Clues and Red HerringsBut don't keep your readers totally in the dark - give them a few clues so they can make an
intelligent guess. It's a delicate balance - the events and the characters in your story shouldn't be predictable, but what happens should make sense.
A teacher may turn out to be a vampire, and this should be enough of a surprise to excite the reader, but there should have been the odd sign - a
pupil with two little red marks on his neck, the teacher refusing to eat garlic in the school canteen, and so on.You can also give red herrings. These
are false clues, meant to lead the reader to a false conclusion, so it's not too easy to guess what's going on. Another teacher might be really mean
and have big teeth, so the reader suspects it's he who is the vampire - but it's really the teacher who seems very nice and friendly (but doesn't like
crosses...)Your readers will have much more fun when they have a chance to guess what's going on - when it's not too easy, but not too hard, to tell
what will happen.
2. Be ClearThis is one of the most important rules of any sort of writing. Say what you mean to say. Read over your writing and ask yourself, if
someone else were reading this, would they understand what you're going on about? Is it clear?Partly this is a matter of using good grammar - putting
your sentences together in the right way - partly using the right words, and partly not using too many words.Grammar'John saw the lion looking out of
his car.' This sentence tells us that what John saw was a lion in a car, looking out. But perhaps what the writer really meant was that John was in
his car, and looking out of it, he saw a lion. A better way to write the sentence would be: 'Looking out of his car, John saw a lion.'A lot of people
write sentences like that which confuse the reader, because it's not certain what they were meant to say. So you must read every sentence you have
written, and make sure it says what you meant it to say. If not, rewrite it. Words 'John slipped down the icy hill on his sledge.' Is slipped the best
word here? Slipped usually means something accidental - you might slip on ice.
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