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Is this poetry?

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posted on Dec, 9 2011 @ 01:26 AM
Any thoughts?

Sure as the ball will rise
Slips in thoughts of you.
Slow Squeezing so softly
..a dream or two.
The light comes up
The life pours in
You’ll be there for me
No time for dread
All this I can see
just this glimpse
Fast and qucik
Fill me with joy
inside my head
you crazy boy...
time for bed

posted on Dec, 9 2011 @ 01:36 AM
reply to post by MidnightSunshine

yes I think so. I write a bit like that but most of the time, it does not rhyme
oh time and rhyme = rhyme

I wrote the 'I want' thread and it does not rhyme. I am pretty sure you can frame any creative writing anyway you want. That is a difficult task especially as it is hard to put in 'emphasis' in the written word but writing that rhymes tends to act as a stop or pause.

I like what you have written. It is short and sweet. I try to write to suit what I like and your style is definitely in my like category.

Long sentences, long paragraphs and single spacing can be a struggle to read.

Either way, I liked what you have written and I am sure that it would be in the genre of Poetry.

posted on Dec, 9 2011 @ 02:00 AM
reply to post by MidnightSunshine

yes this is poetry most certainly!but other things aswell! thanks for sharing. keep it comming when you feel it.
Theres a well inside
not alwasy will it need
to burst outside.
but neither should it
be hidden.
For if one hides
our many sides.
one is destined.
to be bed ridden.
best wishes

edit on 9-12-2011 by ancientthunder because: missing a detail

posted on Dec, 9 2011 @ 02:23 AM
reply to post by ancientthunder

reply to post by Thurisaz

Thanks to both of you for the positive comments, feels good. Just trying my hand. I think of poetry often, I don't write very much. Yes it turned out a little racey...

posted on Dec, 9 2011 @ 05:42 PM
read my poem

posted on Feb, 22 2012 @ 02:40 PM
Hmmm.... I'm not even certain I can reply to this poetry!!! LOL....and is poetry. Poems don't have to rhyme!

posted on Feb, 23 2012 @ 12:11 AM
reply to post by webpirate

HEYYYY I thought it DID rhyme!!!

You likey huh Webby???

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