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Originally posted by TDawgRex
reply to post by gimme_some_truth
If this isn't how you feel, please continue the story.
However, I too wander this world alone. I consider it a adventure. I have had friends and family pass on and have grieved their loss, but I move on as I know they would wanted me too.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Originally posted by gimme_some_truth
Originally posted by TDawgRex
reply to post by gimme_some_truth
If this isn't how you feel, please continue the story.
However, I too wander this world alone. I consider it a adventure. I have had friends and family pass on and have grieved their loss, but I move on as I know they would wanted me too.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Deep down it is a fictional representation that symbolizes how I feel.
Originally posted by Kaiju
I'm curious as to why you chose a very negative story? You could just as easily written a happy, uplifting story that might have actually helped brighten someones day and left your reader feeling at peace.
Originally posted by JR MacBeth
Thanks OP.
Not fictional for all of us.
The God thing...
First. rename the beast something disrespectful, like "Schmod".
Yes, NO respect. I mean ZERO.
Next, when you step out into the morning air, be it a beautiful day, or not, put your finger in the air. That will feel good after a while. Trust me.
Finally, every now and then, just make sure to keep tanked-up...
REMEMBER
Remember that suddenly empty swing, so still, so mocking.
Remember when you tore it down...For the wife, who could no longer bear looking at it...
Because you could no longer bear her crying.
Remember the monstrous empty hole in your middle, that nothing could fill.
Remember a whole world that did not come close to comprehending.
And then SWEAR, to never again entertain the childish notion of a "good" god.
Santa Claus isn't real anymore...What a shame.
But knowing is not enough!
From now on, you are "his" sworn enemy!
The simpletons all around you, who still imagine a "good" god, you shall seek to disabuse of such childish notions.
A poison you shall be, in their midst.
Even the parish priest, who has sacrificed his life, in service to this god, you shall not spare! You shall learn the things he knows, and then some, and he shall hear them, and his former vocation, shall turn to ashes in his mouth!
And you shall bravely stare into the abyss, and laugh when it stares back!
Don't worry! All who have experienced what I have, feel free to cross the threshold!
True, dark figures beyond this doorway of the Abyss do bind, and chain. You might as well know.
No, you can never go back.
But there is no sweeter satisfaction, then to spit upon the One who has made this Hell, and feel absolutely no regret.
Perhaps there is a god, but the Christians have it right...Crucify him!
JR
Originally posted by ofhumandescent
reply to post by gimme_some_truth
Beautifully written.
Second line.
Originally posted by ANOK
Nice story, but I don't understand why people blame God for their problems.
The problems that you suffer from are problems you make.
You have free will, God does not micro-manage peoples lives.
No one wants to take responsibility for their own actions anymore, always looking for something to blame it on.