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TDC 2018 A Clump of Cells

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posted on Aug, 13 2018 @ 08:06 PM
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originally posted by: bally001
a reply to: Sheye

You don't have to do a better job. Judging from the responses, regardless of what you reply, "this is a piece of fiction.' Everyone has their unique writing or take on a situation. This is no exception.

You have touched hearts so criticism as outlined is a compliment. Well done I say
You do not have to do a better job. Your take on this subject was exceptional.

kind regards,

bally






posted on Aug, 13 2018 @ 08:07 PM
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That was probably the most short and also powerful story I've ever read. Anywhere. Anytime.

You gotta lot of sand, and that story hit hard. Well done.


I also greatly enjoyed the narrative tone of the story.



posted on Aug, 13 2018 @ 08:13 PM
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a reply to: DBCowboy

First line,

Second line

bally



posted on Aug, 13 2018 @ 08:15 PM
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a reply to: argentus

Great to see your comment.

Would be good to see some more flags on this short story.

bally



posted on Aug, 13 2018 @ 08:21 PM
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originally posted by: bally001
a reply to: Sheye

You don't have to do a better job. Judging from the responses, regardless of what you reply, "this is a piece of fiction.' Everyone has their unique writing or take on a situation. This is no exception.

You have touched hearts so criticism as outlined is a compliment. Well done I say
You do not have to do a better job. Your take on this subject was exceptional.

kind regards,

bally


Thank you for that support bally... means the world to me.😊



posted on Aug, 13 2018 @ 08:24 PM
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a reply to: argentus

Wow... thank you so much for the awesome compliment. I’m thrilled I could touch some people’s emotions so powerfully with my short story.



posted on Aug, 13 2018 @ 09:12 PM
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Excellent. The shock factor was great. Grea

edit on 13-8-2018 by highvein because: (no reason given)



posted on Aug, 13 2018 @ 10:25 PM
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originally posted by: highvein



Excellent. The shock factor was great. Grea


Thank you for taking the time to read it highvein.. and post a comment.. so happy you enjoyed it.



posted on Aug, 14 2018 @ 05:19 AM
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a reply to: Sheye

That was neat, can't help but feel that one under my skin as I read it.




posted on Aug, 14 2018 @ 01:44 PM
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originally posted by: SprocketUK
a reply to: Sheye

That was neat, can't help but feel that one under my skin as I read it.



Thanks SpocketUK ... it was a very short story, but a story nonetheless.😕



posted on Sep, 4 2018 @ 11:18 PM
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Some of the most powerful pieces of art are the ones that evoke the strongest emotions. Which emotions aren't important. Only that they are conjured by the images created by the artist.





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