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I see the real you! (Poem)

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posted on Mar, 8 2015 @ 11:29 AM
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Through your eyes, I see your mind, and every feeling hidden inside.
I see your pain, I see your joy, all those thing you try to hide.

Thought your eyes, I know your soul, all the anger you don’t let out.
It consumes your hart, every little part, of that I have no doubt.

You walk around, surrounded by the world, but you are still alone.
Your hart is a stranger to your mind; to you it’s still unknown.

You need to look at yourself, speak with your mind, let her tell you first.
You are lost to your mind, your heart alone, both dying from the thirst.

Still waters run deep in the heart and soul, but in you there is a storm.
You can either calm the storm, or continue to live an artificial form.

See yourself, feel your pain, don’t let it stay down inside!
Don’t live so cold, not accepting your pain, denounce your own pride!

I life in the dark, not knowing yourself, is like sharing a body with a stranger!
Living a life alone, not knowing yourself, is living a life in danger!

Everybody hurts, it’s who we are, denying it will only break you down!
Say goodbye to pretending, see your own feeling, and take up your crown!





posted on Mar, 8 2015 @ 11:54 AM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

This is Awesome!!! Very Very Good!!!



posted on Mar, 8 2015 @ 12:12 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Thanks. It was a spur of the moment writing! I think the 'block' is giving way a bit.



posted on Mar, 8 2015 @ 12:15 PM
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Very nice flow and message. I understand the block thing too.





posted on Mar, 8 2015 @ 12:19 PM
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a reply to: IndependentOpinion

Well You look pretty Un-Blocked to Me Bud!! I love the depth You shared here with us!!!



posted on Mar, 8 2015 @ 12:39 PM
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a reply to: DaphneApollo

Thanks Daphne!



posted on Mar, 8 2015 @ 12:40 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

Always a pleasure Syx!



posted on Mar, 8 2015 @ 05:32 PM
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a reply to: SyxPak

For me, if its not deep and meaningful, its kind of useles. No offence, I still enjoy reading other stuff, but writing them is something else for me.




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