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Unconditionally (poem)

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posted on Mar, 25 2014 @ 10:20 AM
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Unconditionally

Come talk to me for awhile,
I wish to know you better.
From me you don't need to hide,
Show me who you are inside.
It will not matter what I see,
I'll love you unconditionally.


Come sit with me for while,
I wish to hold you close.
Let me gaze into your eyes,
Get lost in paradise,
It will not matter what I see,
So long as you are here with me.


Come show me who you are,
Let me see into your soul,
Let's share our deepest desires,
And see what transpires,
It doesn't matter what you say,
I will love you anyways.


I have known for some time,
That we are meant for one another.
I feel you with me in my heart,
Even though we're worlds apart,
That doesn't matter at all to me,
I will love you for eternity.

Thanks,
Blend57




posted on Mar, 25 2014 @ 11:02 AM
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Very nice blend! Thanks for sharing this. Seems like this poem is pretty close to you. Very well written, traditional structure, I like it. Hope you'll share more!




posted on Mar, 25 2014 @ 11:25 AM
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Nice stuff as usual blend. Always look forward to your poems. They are great
. Always seem like true life experiences to



posted on Mar, 25 2014 @ 12:01 PM
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Close to me...yes. It goes deeper than most would look. Words hidden within words. Traditional structure is easier to do this with...at least for me right now. I'm sure once I get the hang of this stuff.....I will write better poetry.

I'm glad you liked it. And grateful that you let me know.

Thanks,
Blend57



posted on Mar, 25 2014 @ 12:05 PM
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You put out some really good stuff as well. I've read and enjoyed all of your writing. Looking forward to seeing some more.

Thanks!
Blend57



posted on Mar, 25 2014 @ 12:14 PM
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Very Nice , Emotional and touching at least for me
Thank you for sharing


Riouz



posted on Mar, 26 2014 @ 08:14 AM
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Nice.. That poem reminds me of something.
Very well written



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