Sacred Heart

My first thread!!!! I know it's sappy, but I'm in love

I'd sever my limbs willingly
If u wanted them as prize

I'd set myself ablaze
For a sparkle in your eyes

Then I'd sew myself together
For a new appearance

If I could fool you for
Another second in your presence

But all that pain and suffering
Never would compare

To all the love I have for you
The love that we can share

There's endless love between us
Even more will have its start

Even when it goes unnoticed
I'm pouring love into your heart

a reply to: Samilton

Nice poem, I enjoyed it.

Looking forward to anything else you might share. The short stories forum has been a little slow recently, no help from me...

*le sigh*

a reply to: Samilton

Very nice writing samilton
I sure do love some good poetry and you have a nice talent of writing thanks for sharing your work with us and continue to write ... writing can help release what you feel ..IMO

Have a nice day -nat

a reply to: Samilton

Sappy poetry is beautiful!

I really like it

a reply to: Samilton
Hi there. I liked that a
Lot. Poems from the heart are the best ones Keep them coming

a reply to: Samilton

What a lovely poem! Read it several times, you've got talent!

Wish I had the guts to post my stuff but alas, I'm a chicken.

a reply to: Samilton
Oh and just to let ya know.. It's not sappy at all. It's a sweet poem with kinda a wicked twist in the beginning.. I truly did enjoy this one

a reply to: Samilton
Very nice poem Op 1 enjoyed keep up the good writing.

NAMASTE*******

a reply to: CagliostroTheGreat

Thanks. Looking forward to reading something from you.

a reply to: natalia

Thanks for the support Natalia. I enjoy your writing very much ...looking forward to your next poem.

a reply to: Jennyfrenzy

Thanks Jenny. Glad you liked it.

a reply to: TheDoctor46

Thanks Doc. I like your writing also.

a reply to: LucidLucinda

Thanks for the compliment.

You should share some of your writing.

a reply to: natalia

Glad you enjoyed it

a reply to: Ophiuchus 13

Thanks Ophiuchus. I'll try to make them good.