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Short Sentences, Big Meanings Writing Contest [Feb2014]{WINNERS}

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posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 10:10 PM
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Hi miss Tenth, not sure if this will make you cry - but it might warm your Valetine's Heart.


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"Self Portraits"

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Happy Valetine's everyone!

Be well all




posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 10:43 PM
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[Staff Edit]

[Disqualified entry]
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posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 11:03 PM
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Dont be upset

Even if this gets me in trouble


Take it as a badge of honor...

turn around and sell it


A lot of good work gets banned and or ignored

Go with it

I would try to submit it to a publication

Dude it got banned.. yes t and c..
but most of the artsy poets I know actually love that
you now have a story to tell


Honestly
I have no respect for poetry

It will cost me I know
But I entered to get feedback on an area of writing I lack

improvement comes from experience


Rock on



posted on Feb, 12 2014 @ 11:35 PM
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One more from a non-writer.

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posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 12:24 AM
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Contest Entry ]non writer]
Along Waters' Edge [Feb2014]
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posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 03:40 AM
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posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 08:04 AM
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Ok here's my feeble attempt lol...[Non Writer]My Valentine...Good luck all



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 08:30 AM
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Here is my first entry.

How to Love a Feminist

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posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 09:08 AM
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The Choice of the Female Eagle (Feb2014) by InTheLight (Non-writer)

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This is my poetic submission leaning somewhat on Valentine's Day. I hope you all enjoy.



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 10:25 AM
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[Feb2014] untitled Free Verse

deux

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posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 11:00 AM
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HumAnnunaki

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Happy Valetine's everyone!


This is my second of the three submissions allowed;
MY first submission was a love poem - this one is a love gone wrong poem
written about Romeo and Juliette..but as the title suggests, it has a twist
and if you want to know more -
You'll have to read the poem...

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"Twisted Fate"
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Coursing through the submitted poetry, the talent here is huge!
Be well all



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 11:59 AM
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I'm in. I do love poetry, especially if it says a lot in just a few words. Good luck to all entries.



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 12:49 PM
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"California" love poem [Feb2014]

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Third and last of the series.

Writer



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 01:11 PM
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Highly edited version of my previous submission (to adhere to T&C).

My entry.

Bum Probe.

(again, no pun intended.)



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 02:04 PM
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Second entry, Dick Rash.

(no pun intended.)



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 02:08 PM
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Great submissions so far guys.

I want to point out however that the THEME of the contest has to be related to:

1. The ATS Community

2. Valentine's Day.

Some of the current submissions may not quite fit that bill. I'll be reviewing each one and notifying those affected via PM.

I'll also update the OP over the next few days with all the submissions.

~Tenth



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 02:17 PM
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This is NOT my third poem for the Poetry contest
but I thought I would post it here..for anyone
whom needs a little chuckle..(and yes - it's a TRUE story)
(my third and final installment will be posted within the next day or so)

"Consummation"

I made you my Wife
And you made me your Groom
The wedding was over
So we went to our room

I wanted you bad
This was stuck in my .
So I took off your gown
And got you in bed

All I could think of
Was to get some 'nookies'
But I was so drunk
I just woofed my cookies
..



Be well all and if I may say - it's been a pleasure, an honor and a privilege
allowing your most private thoughts to be divulged.



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 02:33 PM
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My submission: Shattered

Actually wrote this on a Valentine's Day over 20 years ago after taking a gamble and losing. Was my first real heart break.



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 04:08 PM
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Hope you guys enjoy, as I'm still kinda new at this. Not at writing, but at writing with large audiences in mind.

Embers



posted on Feb, 13 2014 @ 05:23 PM
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[non-writer]
In 2008 I wrote my one and and only go at Englishish poetry for a valentine poetry contest. I've polished it somewhat but it is mostly intact as it was written to be. I believe I've not written poetry in any language since, so not to worry there is more to come. Though polishing it made me remember the flow one can get into when rhythm and rhyming.

Gunslinger



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