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posted on Jun, 24 2013 @ 09:49 PM
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Streaks of lightning ran through her wild mane

As black stained cheeks arrived again

Artic blue eyes burned furiously with rage

Frantically grasping her rusted brass cage

Fits of fury vibrated to the core

Shrieks on echo that'll be ignored

Naked trees sway violently east

Alone and shaken... forever deceased

~nat the blue eyed cat~




posted on Jun, 24 2013 @ 10:09 PM
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I like it! I didnt know until recently they had forums for artists and writers on ATS but Im glad I found out cause who knows how many of these gems ive missed out on before



posted on Jun, 24 2013 @ 10:14 PM
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Hey thanks
I appreciate ya taking the time to read real quick..its short but pretty much to the point..hidden meanings in all


I love this forum. Many great writers


~nat



posted on Jun, 24 2013 @ 10:14 PM
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reply to post by natalia
 

Takes a bride to know a bride.
Beautiful prose as usual. S&F



posted on Jun, 24 2013 @ 10:16 PM
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reply to post by tanda7
 


Oh yes indeed my friend.

I thought that picture fit perfect with my poem


thanks for reading

~nat



posted on Jun, 24 2013 @ 10:17 PM
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Thank you for sharing for sure! I'll be posting in this forum along with the art forum often now I know that they are here. I liked your allusion to the rusted cage, been married long
jk



posted on Jun, 24 2013 @ 10:27 PM
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Please publish and contact us with ordering info.
You are talented.



posted on Jun, 24 2013 @ 10:32 PM
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You are absolutely too kind friend. I truly think my poetry is 'ok' but not publishing worthy
And I try to look at the positive,it can just be hard at times ya know. Also a friend just gave me a site where I can share my poetry and people can buy it if they want...hmm..I have not really looked into it yet. I am the worst procrastinator
hah.

I really appreciate your kind words. I would love to hear anything new you have.


~nat



posted on Jun, 24 2013 @ 10:37 PM
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Originally posted by Brotherman
Can't wait to read and see your work

Share soon.
~nat
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edit on 24-6-2013 by natalia because: (no reason given)



posted on Jun, 25 2013 @ 02:29 AM
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natalia, I mostly come and check in here at the short stories forum to specifically read what you may have presented my dear friend....as ever, you did it again! I love it! I treasure your endeavors and enjoy grayeagles writings and Slayer and some others here but I wonder what ever happened to another great writer that used to come here...laffoe. Miss him.

Always good to "see" you hear. Hugs and love and Blessings.



posted on Jun, 25 2013 @ 07:46 AM
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As echoed above, Another wonderful piece of writing. You can just feel and imagine each verse. Now get those sorted and on that website!



posted on Jun, 25 2013 @ 12:04 PM
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You are just an empty cage if you kill the bird...



posted on Jun, 25 2013 @ 12:24 PM
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Thank you so much sweet friend
I'm glad you enjoy it. And I don't know where laffoe has gone. I messaged him just to see how he was doing, but he hasn't been on ATS since the end of march..maybe he's busy.

I have more, I just haven't shared them yet. And I will share some with you in a private message if ya like. I share some with friends and cousins....sometimes I share with hubby. Anyway. Hope you are having a nice day today.
Peace and love and hugs to you friend
-nat



posted on Jun, 25 2013 @ 12:26 PM
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Hey doc! Thanks for stopping by. Yeah right...me sort things out!? That's a laugh! I'm the biggest procrastinator ever...so it may be closer to never happening! Hahaha! Jk...

Thanks for your kind words as well friend.


Hope you're having a nice evening across the sea...

-nat



posted on Jun, 25 2013 @ 12:31 PM
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Haha. Well never mind one day you will when the times right
...And yes im doing ok today i think!..And your very welcome



posted on Jun, 25 2013 @ 12:52 PM
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Originally posted by abeverage
You are just an empty cage if you kill the bird...

You do know I can be nat the ditzy ding bat right?! ... I'm not trying to kill the bird(me)
Someone/something is killing the bird from the outside....if that makes sense.

Riddle me this batman...

-nat the confused cat-



posted on Jun, 25 2013 @ 12:59 PM
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Originally posted by natalia

Originally posted by abeverage
You are just an empty cage if you kill the bird...

You do know I can be nat the ditzy ding bat right?! ... I'm not trying to kill the bird(me)
Someone/something is killing the bird from the outside....if that makes sense.

Riddle me this batman...

-nat the confused cat-






lol a bird drawn on a paper towel with white out and a ball point pen
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posted on Jun, 25 2013 @ 01:05 PM
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that was not bad at all


I actually just dropped by because of the title "untitled" and was worried if i was goin to miss out on something good, and it seems like i would had, so im glad i dropped by your post

You cant just make up good poetry, its has to come from within - im surely goin to watch out for more of this


have a nice day



posted on Jun, 25 2013 @ 02:15 PM
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That's really good. I like your bird


-nat



posted on Jun, 25 2013 @ 02:19 PM
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My birds cage is a paper towel, unfortunately it is stuck between inanimate status and completion... poor bird



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