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posted on Feb, 10 2013 @ 02:17 PM
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I am powerful to the uninformed.

Innocents are simply unsurpassed.

I will have them completely transformed.

They are kept behind a glass.

Split the psyche into several.

As the mirror shatters to pieces.

Take the bait, escape the pain.

A broken mirror is all that remains.

It's over now when you have new names.
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Been trying to help my cousin come up with some lyrics for his song he's writing about a handler from their view.
Just wanted to share. I'm still trying to come up with more. He already has some lyrics as well.

Thanks for reading, I don't think this is the best at all. Just something I played around with when he asked me to help. I just wanted to share.

~nat the crazed cat~




posted on Feb, 10 2013 @ 02:35 PM
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I wish i could come up with some nice stuff like you nat. Very good as usual. I have permanent writers block when it comes to just about everything.



posted on Feb, 10 2013 @ 02:37 PM
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Nat, you definitely have a gift!




posted on Feb, 10 2013 @ 02:41 PM
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I'm sure you can.

You are a sweet soul.

-nat the blue cat-



posted on Feb, 10 2013 @ 02:43 PM
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reply to post by beezzer
 


Thank you kind friend.

This was just me messing around to help my cousin. My hubby had some input to this poem as well.

-nat the blue cat-



posted on Feb, 11 2013 @ 04:42 PM
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I so love your writings! You say so much with such depth...it is a joy to watch your creative endeavors and am so glad you wish to share them here with all of us. Hugs to a wonderful talent and a sweet friend. ^j^



posted on Feb, 11 2013 @ 05:12 PM
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You are so sweet. I'm glad I'm able to share.

This is still a work in progress....


Peace to you
-nat the blue eyed cat-
Oh and *hugs* back to you
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posted on Feb, 12 2013 @ 06:21 AM
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Originally posted by natalia
I am powerful to the uninformed.

Innocents are simply unsurpassed.

I will have them completely transformed.

They are kept behind a glass.

Split the psyche into several.

As the mirror shatters to pieces.

Take the bait, escape the pain.

A broken mirror is all that remains.

It's over now when you have new names.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Been trying to help my cousin come up with some lyrics for his song he's writing about a handler from their view.
Just wanted to share. I'm still trying to come up with more. He already has some lyrics as well.

Thanks for reading, I don't think this is the best at all. Just something I played around with when he asked me to help. I just wanted to share.

~nat the crazed cat~



Deep!


I really like it. Detailed enough to capture some kind of idea, but general enough to apply to many feelings. It made me think of Evanesence.

Very freakin' awesome OP!

S&F!



posted on Feb, 12 2013 @ 09:16 AM
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Thanks friend! You can call me nat.


I like your stories as well. I'm more of a poet but am working on improving my poetry.

Your story humanity was awesome! I like your style.

Peace and love
-nat the crazed cat-



posted on Feb, 12 2013 @ 09:19 AM
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Originally posted by natalia
reply to post by XxNightAngelusxX
 


Thanks friend! You can call me nat.


I like your stories as well. I'm more of a poet but am working on improving my poetry.

Your story humanity was awesome! I like your style.

Peace and love
-nat the crazed cat-


Thanks a lot


I don't do enough stories like Humanity... made me happy to finish this morning, though.


I can do a little poetry, but I'm more of a story writer/illustrator.

Also, you can call me Jewel.



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posted on Feb, 12 2013 @ 09:20 AM
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I love it .. do you have more verses ?



posted on Feb, 12 2013 @ 09:26 AM
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Thanks, no more verses, yet, I will be working on more soon though..


Thanks again

Peace and love
-nat the one eyed cat-



posted on Feb, 12 2013 @ 09:50 AM
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That was great.

I'm starting to expect nothing less from you



posted on Feb, 12 2013 @ 10:14 AM
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Thanks friend.

But goodness....that face is so funny!!

Expect nothing less from me....yikes...


Peace and love
-nat the mangled cat-





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