The Greatest Conspiracy Is The Idea Of Continuing To Ignore The Within

Yes look outwards , blame others, join the dots to nowhere.
Look inside you, and find the magical answer.
But no...TV, conspiracy forums, news broadcasts.
They say no you must participate, but then you die and all these things dissipate.
Left alone ...do you know your home, do you know your home, do you know your home,do you know your home, do you know your home, do you know your home?

You better know your home.

Left alone ...do you know your home, do you know your home, do you know your home,do you know your home, do you know your home, do you know your home?

i like your topic, its kind of:
People (who live) in glass houses shouldn't throw stones.
Talk about the pot calling the kettle black!
Don't throw bricks when you live in a glass house.
i have some critic, too: the "do you know your home" is too often, it makes your poem kitschy, imo.

reply to post by icepack


Yes about a million miles away but YES ...this pimpernickel reply deserves a star.

Thanks for not quoting the punchline ....lest ye get knocked out by the truth?

reply to post by Dr Expired

i guess, your body is your home or temple.
could you repeat your poem in an objective argumentation mode ?
just like you would explain your message to a guy on the street.

The silence remains a world of fear for most that know it is even there.
The silence remains a world of doubt for most that even know its there.
The silence remains noisy in the mundane thoughts of the world.
go within, find the silence, find your home.

reply to post by Agarta



Good counterpoint , thanks.

reply to post by icepack


Forget all this, we all have a home, get off the street and listen to the beat....
Of that you were torn from to come to this place....
You can never escape, for that would be a hell you could not bear.

reply to post by Dr Expired

imo, a bit too negative and agressive.