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For my Misanthropic friends: The Forgotten.

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posted on Aug, 30 2011 @ 11:49 PM
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This is something I wrote earlier in response to the intricate way that human beings succumb to a lifestyle perpetrated by such a complacent process of thinking. It only serves to make them weak of spirit and self-hating as if it were some Masochistic remedial beast writhing within the confines of their mind. Truly sickening to see human beings so numb and ghost-like. This small snip of my writing are the thoughts that flow through my head at all hours, day and night, driving me ever closer to the floodgates of insanity.


The Forgotten

To lie beneath such creatures of "constructive thought"
There is no room to rise above
We must lie, lurking, in the ominous pits of our intelligence...
A thought provokes thee to bleed upon pages, that which has risen, yet it is strangled out by that enterprise of idiocy, ever so valiantly proclaiming victory over the lesser-mind.

We consider our tattered constumes badges of such high honor
The elite our inferiors
And our signature that of the raised fist!

It seems as if humanity has eaten the fruit of eden, though from the tree of ignorance.

We are the serpentine roots of Misanthropy, as well as it's fettered leaves
Eternally screaming, as we flail away into the abyss of night
No sanctimonious hymns sung aloud as we pass through portals of malcontent

We sway ever so violently, as ships of ink in paper seas.
Sighned: The Forgotten....

Toxicblud




posted on Aug, 30 2011 @ 11:52 PM
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Pretty good poem but just something about your signature "toxicblud" makes it hard for me to take it seriously.

No offence meant of course. Nice work



posted on Aug, 30 2011 @ 11:54 PM
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Thank you, I know. I didn't want to put my name on it.



posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 12:02 AM
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You would definitely enjoy Mirrorthrone.

Forget all your neurotic constructions
And face the source of your dissatisfaction
One last time
One last time...
Or have all my attempts always been vain
Disregarded, lost under disdain?
Could all my scars and wasted blood
Only be remembered by the silent mud?
Sucked away from each infected memory
Vanishing under each gaze, inexorably?

edit on 8/31/2011 by BirdOfillOmen because: (no reason given)



posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 12:04 AM
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I keep thinking of the famous poets throughout history and seeing their poems signed, "venomslayer" or "deathbringer". Hahaha maybe you will start a trend



posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 12:07 AM
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Yes I like alot of black metal, mostly traditional but Mirrorthrone's avant-garde brand is also quite entertaining. Not a bad project for one man. I love a symphonic backdrop.



posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 12:10 AM
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Hahaha. Very interesting concept. Quite humorous also. I could only imagine the late great H.P. Lovecraft or Poe signing their writings with such a silly moniker. Funny thought.



posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 01:19 PM
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With the way the generations are evolving, I'd be more surprised if someone didn't actually name their kid Death Slayer or Venom Blood.

If I could afford it, I would legally change my name to Forever Chaos.


But then I'm not much of a poet, writer, artist, or anything.


I would not consider anything written "less serious" based on their name or psuedonym. Wouldn't that be closed minded of me?

 

Dear OP
I enjoyed your work - S&F for you
Cool name too

♥ Forever Chaos
edit on 31-8-2011 by Forevever because: op



posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 04:09 PM
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Thank you friend, I appreciate it.



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