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reply posted on 18-2-2010 @ 05:56 PM by jeanvaljean
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Interesting idea.

Being of a cautious nature, I carefully opened the front door and inched my way in. I was immediately struck by the strange aroma drifting from the kitchen. Before I could take another step, Leo hissed and ran back outside.The kitchen door was ajar. I could make out the shadow of someone standing motionless. I took out my fishing knife and waited. The sound of the storm outside and the silence in the hallway harmonised perfectly, together yet separate. And in between, the ancient, primal dread that haunts us all held me completely still.

New words: bottle, music, hollow, stairs, primitive


reply posted on 19-2-2010 @ 05:26 PM by jeanvaljean
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I was caught between two intruders, throbbing pain shooting from my ankle. I looked at the puny knife in my hand and was weirdly reminded of the scene in Crocodile Dundee: "You call that a knife? *This* is a knife."
I could not help myself; I chuckled. If ever I possessed one grain of fortitude, in that moment, I lost it. The strange smell I'd noticed when I first came in wafted stronger in my direction but I could not identify it. It had a sensuous quality and was not unpleasant. I felt myself drifting. A gentle meow brought me back to my senses. I came to, soaking wet, outside my house. The storm had abated and the fog softly outlined the cliffs in the distance.

fur, meandering, mystery, soft, scream.


reply posted on 25-2-2010 @ 07:54 PM by jeanvaljean
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When I regained consciousness, I found myself lying on the dock. This being moved around without my consent was getting old. This time though, a pain like I never felt before was nailing me to the concrete. Every breath I tried to take took me back to my childhood, when the smallest sorrow felt like the end of the world. Now, I finally understood what old Jed meant when he'd shake his head in disgust at the TV, an everlasting, battered cigarette hanging from his lower lip: "did you ever get shot?", he'd ask me for the umpteenth time. "Do you really think you could get up and run around like that?" That old bastard was right. I could not move. I didn't want to. I just lay there, waiting for something, anything to happen. And it finally did. Mary came running out of nowhere with Jonesy, or whatever his name was, and for the first time since I'd caught them together at Mary's place, I felt no hatred. In fact, I found the strength to smile. Jonesy was a vet and he always had plenty of legal drugs on his person. For once, he'd have something to brag about on his bloody survival forum.

cove, artifact, undeterred, specious, reputation






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