I like it KSPigpen! Leaves the reader with a strange ominous feeling is the only way I can describe it. That last line though, way too cool to describe.
The beast you created, the profit you'd boost worthless to help you, hell comes home to roost.
Oh, man what this conjures in my mind I'd probably scare myself with! S+F my friend, very very cool. The finality of it, and the impending doom.


I am a HUGE fan of your work. 'Running with the Devil' kicked some serious tail, my friend....talk about ominous. I haven't
read the latest round in the contest yet, but I'm sure it will be another captivating piece.