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Succubus with pus
Pustulating from her mouth
I hope it stays closed
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reply posted on 12-6-2009 @ 05:32 PM by Excitable_Boy
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Dead cars in the yard
Dead from lack of any care
Dead like I am dead
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reply posted on 13-6-2009 @ 04:51 PM by reticledc
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to each their own way
get by until judgment day
sacrifice to pay
it was all just play
just lived for our own payday
now hear the mayday
because all betray
the tide is rising today
survived our heyday
we struggle and pray
fighting against the mêlée
to rise from the fray
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reply posted on 13-6-2009 @ 05:50 PM by blupblup
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breathe in the summer
and feel it flow gently through
release and be calm
paranormal things
happen every so often
It's no big deal man
try to remember
look after your fellow man
for we are all one
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reply posted on 13-6-2009 @ 11:41 PM by whaaa
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Nice form blup...
earthy still addled
gigolos labor, sadly
the autumn returns
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reply posted on 14-6-2009 @ 06:48 AM by blupblup
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reply to post by whaaa
(cheers mate..... I'm new to the thread so that was nice of you to say)
thought Provoking words
flow out from within your mind
just like pouring silk
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reply posted on 14-6-2009 @ 05:22 PM by Spiramirabilis
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thank you much - to Masqua - for letting me come in to play
:-)
pebbles rose star lit
all strokes skittered desert skin
blue dusk sings to sand
warm wallows deeper
spaces lower sweetly dark
wet earth enfolds stone
need grasps for thick sky
field pulls close warm blanket rains
for bare only green
[edit on 6/14/2009 by Spiramirabilis]
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reply posted on 14-6-2009 @ 05:44 PM by whaaa
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..............S. very nice!! Welcome!!
raging dune hardens,
darkly bartender explodes
floating rain drizzle
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reply posted on 14-6-2009 @ 05:47 PM by Spiramirabilis
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reply to post by whaaa
thank you whaaa
i think it will be very good for me to do this at least once a day
:-)
I love haiku - first - it has rules - I need rules sometimes
2nd - short and sweet
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reply posted on 15-6-2009 @ 06:58 PM by whaaa
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charismatic weak
dude rippling lip sprays, sweetie
somersaults rudely
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reply posted on 16-6-2009 @ 07:43 AM by argentus
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As a leaf, tumbling
In the sunlight, reflecting
Disk stuck in the sand
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reply posted on 16-6-2009 @ 05:03 PM by argentus
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Water, roiling rush
Crashing through New York City
Cumbre Vieja
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reply posted on 16-6-2009 @ 07:31 PM by Excitable_Boy
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The web of our life
Stuck with bugs and passers by
Never letting go
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reply posted on 16-6-2009 @ 07:37 PM by Excitable_Boy
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The life in our life
Sucked out like the air we breathe
We're suffocating
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reply posted on 17-6-2009 @ 12:14 AM by Spiramirabilis
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or maybe every other day...
Our words all birds loosed
shadows falling bright through dark
tell electric tales
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reply posted on 17-6-2009 @ 04:22 AM by Dr Conspire
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Originally posted by whaaa
There is a traditional form to Haiku but here it is the spirit that matters.
Thank you for your contributions and may your spirit soar.
Ladies in Summer
off to lunch
wearing high heels
gently huge baby
ripens, bee hobbles, pauper
screams screams
Love in an Atomic Spring
Feel the crispy dead
Chew the tender head, and succulent legs.
Iam white they are yellow
Iam quite mad and so English Autumn sad.
Reach for that God that says he is mine
Iam lost Iam that of the unkind
On a field, ye say a meadow . I cry whatever
It is a place of death, tears for multiple fears
English ....we are none faded culled just gone
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reply posted on 17-6-2009 @ 09:45 AM by whaaa
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harvesting hugely
villainous intense mature
lovers beckon clear
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reply posted on 17-6-2009 @ 04:29 PM by Excitable_Boy
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The death of our life
To start a new adventure
For eternity
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reply posted on 17-6-2009 @ 05:48 PM by jackieps1975
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Another gray day
Lamely gazing at the sky
New York really bites
...now more serious.....
They came from the sky
A message of hope to come
Learn to see the truth
...okay silly again...
One purple flower
Given to me by green men
They keep zapping me
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reply posted on 17-6-2009 @ 05:53 PM by jackieps1975
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Smell the sky, hear light
Kind of tastes like winters' night
He sang in blue-green
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