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Topic started on 25-5-2009 @ 09:48 AM by whaaa
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There is a traditional form to Haiku but here it is the spirit that matters.
Thank you for your contributions and may your spirit soar.
Ladies in Summer
off to lunch
wearing high heels
gently huge baby
ripens, bee hobbles, pauper
screams screams
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reply posted on 25-5-2009 @ 06:06 PM by MischeviousElf
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Lazy Sunny Sunday,
The time is longer Holiday Tommorrow,
Laughter blankets picnics and lust,
Swan eyes old sandwhich lands Splash,
Rowing Boat in lake young man,
barebreasted and impresses,
Looking on bench old man knows how few he has left,
None left to show off to, Or strength to pull oars,
A geese mocks overhead.
Elf
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reply posted on 25-5-2009 @ 06:20 PM by MischeviousElf
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Thirty Minutes of Silence,
Old Tibetan Open's Eyes
Gong,
Student's Stir now from mind Chatter
Lama Twinkle in Eye's,
Blesses the short minutes,
Thirty Years still to pass,
They to then,
Real Silence unharressed.
Elf
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reply posted on 26-5-2009 @ 08:52 AM by whaaa
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soaring spider dozes
frustrated reflection pauses
firstborn dancing
Harshly giddy drum
replies, careless lover
gaudy cowboy smiles
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reply posted on 26-5-2009 @ 09:02 AM by MischeviousElf
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Puppets strings and motors,
Blinks darkened windows.
Contactee Contactee Contactee shouted,
A book printed,
Streams of money flow to untrustworthy rivers today
Fools excited, mocked real victims hush Now
Elf
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reply posted on 27-5-2009 @ 08:47 AM by whaaa
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Dark lovers ask
sleeping adventures burn
slowly slowly mad
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reply posted on 27-5-2009 @ 02:33 PM by MischeviousElf
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Towards Rising Sun,
Madmen Grasp at More.
Small Big Bang,
Earths Heart Shocked.
Ties and Pens pretend Control,
Slipping Slipping,
Nothing to be done.
Elf
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reply posted on 27-5-2009 @ 05:31 PM by Excitable_Boy
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New York's not my home
It stinks like beef and cheeses
And the people suck
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reply posted on 27-5-2009 @ 05:39 PM by Excitable_Boy
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I just read a definition and they (Haiku) usually have a seaonal reference...
What is that damn smell
It's Summer at the tire plant
The air stinks like ass
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reply posted on 27-5-2009 @ 06:22 PM by MischeviousElf
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Long Hot Day's,
Men in Lines,
Looking to Sweat for Gold
New Men Every day new world,
Angry Lines grow
Young mens faces to
Searching saviours
Wanting creases of smiles
War & rumours worse
Seeds planted on time
Madmen smile in palaces
Bitter harvest to be slaughtered soon.
Elf
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reply posted on 27-5-2009 @ 06:23 PM by Excitable_Boy
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Eggs eggs eggs eggs eggs
They be so damn delicious
Fry me up some dem
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reply posted on 27-5-2009 @ 06:25 PM by Excitable_Boy
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Santa is Christmas
The toof fairy is for teef
I like East Bunny
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reply posted on 27-5-2009 @ 06:27 PM by Excitable_Boy
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Mom and dad are dead
My brother died of cancer
I'm dead of living
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reply posted on 27-5-2009 @ 06:29 PM by Excitable_Boy
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Eyes like write Haiku
Every day something new
New Haiku for you
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reply posted on 27-5-2009 @ 06:31 PM by Excitable_Boy
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You want fries with that ?
Cheeseburger Cheeseburger Coke
Hot apple pie bitch
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reply posted on 27-5-2009 @ 07:54 PM by Excitable_Boy
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Red China pinkos
I'm not fond of the Chinese
Ching chang chong talking
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reply posted on 28-5-2009 @ 09:35 AM by reticledc
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lost are the ways
of the past gone days
upon the fray
of a new dawn day
We hope we can
find the promised land
all of the time
it was in our hand
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reply posted on 28-5-2009 @ 09:52 AM by reticledc
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light, day, dark, night
wrong, forgetful, or right
indeterminate
lost, searching, found
profound fondness
living in quietness,
seeking enlightenment
unbound wisdom
of all the things
that i have lost
i miss my mind
the most of all
eyes which look inward,
see most of all clear
eyes that look outward,
predestined to fear.
fate as it seems
is not without
a sense of irony.
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reply posted on 28-5-2009 @ 01:18 PM by whaaa
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soft whip wails
fairly... mice frownin´
old cars mount
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reply posted on 28-5-2009 @ 02:40 PM by jackieps1975
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The hovering mist
Wraps around me, damp and cool
I frown, bring the light
(yep, another cloudy rainy day in these parts. Wah!  )
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