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reply posted on 16-2-2009 @ 11:47 PM by masqua
Victory Child

Victory glowed in your eyes, no doubt.
Burning coals upon an ashen face,
sooty cheeks cleansed pink by tears
marking joy, pain and glory beneath their heat.

Your brutal war is won, millions lost
through the noisesome struggle. Acrid smoke
billows black above the receding floodwaters
where drowned cattle now burn in motor oil.

The Lowlands lay in ruins when you came,
smiling, the conquering major in a Jeep.
Showered with the flowers and kisses tossed
by a population much too long in the shadow.

Gin and flowers are a heady mix
for a victory parade, no doubt, but
so few men waving flags in the crowd.
How did that strike you, major?

Were you saddened by their absence
among wild blond hair and bright blue eyes?
So many tears of joy, gratitude, raw adulation
within the rain of falling bright pedals.

How easy it must have seemed then, Major,
to be accepted into that fine house that night,
taken immediately to the welcoming bosom
of a broken family too long under the Fascist heel.

They gave to you whatever they had hidden.
Food, drink, a warm soft bed and kindness
filling your belly and soul, easing memories
of roaring guns, blood and shattering death.

You've earned these small spoils, major.
Smiling as you accept the gifts they brought.
Allowing them to open their hearts completely
and pile even more gratitude upon gratitude.

Mother came to you that night,
and blessed you with her comfort.
Young and beautiful, she opened herself
to mark this moment with an innocent's gift.


Don't look back, father.
I forgive you.
Don't think twice of me, father.
I forgive you.


reply posted on 30-6-2009 @ 09:40 PM by N3krostatic
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NOW THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!

I really enjoyed new age biker chick, really. What an immense vocabulary you have my friend.
It painted the coolest picture in my head. Probably because I'm a bike freak anyway but regardless, it was definitely something very original. Never heard any poem that went like that.



I enjoy reading your work.

[edit on 30-6-2009 by N3krostatic]


reply posted on 1-7-2009 @ 09:25 AM by masqua
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Thanks for this. I'm glad someone finally took the time to respond and it's much appreciated.

I loved the wind in my face too, back when my legs straddled a beautiful 75th anniversary Harley. The biker chick is an analogy to how I felt back then, riding through the night over deserted highways, the moon lighting my way and the scent of the forest in my nostrils. It was all so primitive and personal.


reply posted on 21-9-2010 @ 03:49 PM by masqua
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Thanks for reading, s.o.

These attempts have fairly well been spur-of-the-moment bits of writing, mostly as a result of reading something or meeting someone interesting.

I need to do some more of this soon.
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