BYO2023 PopEye and Poppa V. ...non writer

Once turned; The cap or popped the 'top' and "it" laid out...
Hoping for the same?
Not by car; Did I arrive...
But by plane.
Not the: Plains as an; Indian of fame...
But by: Chevy, for the; Levy...
Against? Some-one: "Old"...
There is; A point of: Contention;
In which; The testicles, have reached: Dis-tension and "I" Can not; Re-call...
Any-thing!
More: Blue...
Than, my; Own.?. Two: Balls.

The End

a reply to: crowf00t

A bit unusual, crowf00t, but the more I read it, the more I'm seeing into it.

Also, your Chevy/Levy line makes me want to listen to a certain song... maybe, in light of your story, I'll find some hidden meanings there, too.

a reply to: crowf00t

It’s a different short story that is for sure! I like it a lot!t reminded me of something that I will not post here! Lol

a reply to: Encia22
It's a what all went wrong with the Biden generation of elderly retrospective...

I have seen some of those in my small but rational generation of just a decade or generation x meaning ten... 1970 to 1980 stoop to the insecurity of hormone replacements hair plugging dental work etc as they come into some inheritance.

Which is of course sad but not mine and of which I've never expected anything other than death by the witnesses my senses have given me all though out life at the sheer size of insanity within it.

Mind you when I say rational generation x knows reality... I think it silly how many have sworn on made up entities thinking make believe land is better than keeping their sanity.

Every generation having their own pecking orders an mores from it? Politics in keeping things traditional or orthodox in others opinions is the direct cause.

Why is that generation so small? War and incarceration was taking place then of every man and woman under Nixon's reign of terror. To fight a war against a festival that happens yearly in almost all Asian countries.

To think Clinton etc in non partisan politics did the same thing to generation x using tobacco as the funds for it against Islam is utterly ridiculous in how history repeats itself in a "that wont work situation".

Might be easy to forget but that entire generation already had battle fatigue from the previous world war... in the cycle of birth and death.

If there is anything I hate more than my life with these people of other generations it is just that. Other than the make any excuse without honesty to sleep easy knowing one is not guilty no matter what one looks like in profiling etc.

I dont include anyone under that term family and I dont care what anyone says otherwise or thinks or plans in trying to change that Political leanings? I dont want nor need your support dont expect any from me.

a reply to: crowf00t

I've read it a few times now.
Looks now like stepping on a land mine.

a reply to: Encia22



good idea

a reply to: crowf00t

I have read your offering several times. It wasn't until I sang it out loud with my own melody that it began to make sense.

As a lyric it begins to resonate to me as the angst felt in the 70s.

Holy Crap. I just did it out loud as a hip hop rap. If I may:

Once turned; The cap or popped the 'top'
and "it" laid out...
Hoping for the same?
Not by car; ........
Did I arrive...
But by plane.....
Not the: Plains
as an; Indian of fame...
But by: Chevy,
for the; Levy...
Against? Some-one:
"Old"...There is; A
point of: Contention;
In which;
The testicles, have reached:
Dis-tension
and "I" Can not; Re-call...
Any-thing! More: Blue...
Than, my; Own.?.
Two:
Balls.

This works for me. What I recognize is that it is a true expression of your inner dialogue, and for that I have respect.

ETA: I hope never again in my life to sing out loud "testicles" , unless done as a really, really weird opera.
"Tesssssssssss-ti-cleeeeeeeeeeeeeeees
testicles
testicles
Tesssssssss-ti-clessssssssssssssss. NEVERmind

a reply to: argentussy

Being 51 and happy I have left the below the belt alone finally at peace from it; Others expectations have been anything; but that. Even though I see it as a state of grace and growing old?

It(the writing) comes from the perspective of staring at a Viagra while knowing those expectations. The persons eye color? Moot with a tongue in cheek if any other "balls" are that color? You don't need it.