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Open letter about love

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posted on Sep, 22 2016 @ 02:41 PM
Because everybody loving is still a child inside
Because those acting with a pure heart
Are the heroes of our time
I'll save the world with your love in me
Because I am here for you,
No I exist because of you
Because you kept the ability to love
And the power of forgiveness
Is a part of who you are
I was awakened and what slept
Is now leading this pen
and writing for you
This letter about love

I fell head first under water
Something was pulling me down
And I am sure I would have drowned
If it wouldn't have been you I found
I was devastated like everyone is
But you resurrected me now I'm hungry for life
Feed me with experience every word from you
Is like nutrition to me and I feed you
As if you'd need me if you're looking at me
And if I'm honest I can promise nothing
Because that would be fraud
But you say with a smile
Here and now is enough
You are what stops
The machinery of thoughts
And I take you with me for a nightflight

And I wear my heart open for every one to see
And all I can hope is this song might be something you read
Like an open letter for everyone to see
Reflecting in eachothers eyes it's you and me

(Original from Thomas d)

edit on 22-9-2016 by Peeple because: Stupid auto

edit on 22-9-2016 by Peeple because: More auto mess

posted on Sep, 22 2016 @ 02:47 PM
Wow ... Nice

Moving words my friend

posted on Sep, 22 2016 @ 02:55 PM
a reply to: Peeple


posted on Sep, 22 2016 @ 03:17 PM

posted on Sep, 22 2016 @ 03:50 PM
a reply to: Peeple

What a beautiful love letter.

I watched the video while reading along the lyrics in the English translation.

posted on Sep, 22 2016 @ 04:07 PM
Ah . . . .the old "nightflight" experience.

Thank you.

posted on Sep, 22 2016 @ 05:02 PM
a reply to: Peeple

love like that, that can make a time stop is pure and a food for the soul!
and even by reading or thinking about it can be like a meal made of love,
so thank you for cooking this up and putting this on ats table!

it is beautiful and delicious!

edit on 1474581912905September059053016 by UniFinity because: (no reason given)

posted on Sep, 22 2016 @ 06:02 PM
a reply to: Peeple

breathtakingly deep!
You've taken your writing to an amazing new level, one of great character and decisiveness.
Very nice!

posted on Sep, 22 2016 @ 06:14 PM
What? No horses killed?? No explosions? No dark denouement? No, "duh-duh- duhhhhhhnnnnnnn"?? No, "This is the end... or is it????"


Well done! Nice word images in my brain to go along with the goofy smile. Thanks for the drop of hope in this sea of sorrow! No emoticons for :heart hi-five: but if there was one I would tag this response with it! So I guess this will have to do...

[Mind is still in Meta Café mode, so Zep's "Night flight" and Alice in Chains, "Sea of Sorrow" have bubbled into my inner iPod...]

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