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The Shadow Behind You...

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posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:37 PM
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The air of love was so clear,
Time Long ago I was lost,

Seas of love and warmth took us away,
The cloud of warm rain told me your name.

It was you who was moved by me,
A shadow close to the sea kissed my lips.

The rising waters edge was your hands pulling at me,
All the lost fish over the sea found you for me.

As the earth saw the blue moon,
The shadow behind you was me...🐓
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posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:43 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12
Blue moon, you saw me standing alone
Without a dream in my heart
Without a love of my own...
Rodgers and Hart (1934)

Good one, man. Keep up the good work.



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:44 PM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

I reall want to thank you Skid Mark.



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:45 PM
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Either you met a girl or you're writing 1000 love poems online.

?? Shrugs...



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:47 PM
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a reply to: breakingbs

Lol you are right. It was the first part.



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:49 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

-Awesome.- ...



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:49 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

I really love this one it's beautiful, Thankyou.🐓



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:52 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

I love you it was who has changed my life. You are chicken...🐓
Olive juice too!!!
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posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:54 PM
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a reply to: breakingbs

I want to thank you, have a great day!



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:56 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12
Just keep writing your poems. They're all good so far. Even if I don't comment, I've at least starred and flagged them.



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:57 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Good for you. I'll trust you on the whole...(?)chicken and olive juice thing. Just gotta ride with life you know.








o thank u 2 (edited cuz someone else replied...)



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posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:59 PM
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One of your best thus far. I loved it!



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 08:01 PM
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Good one Q!



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 08:03 PM
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a reply to: tadaman

Tadaman, coming from you that means a lot. I am happy to see you!



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 08:04 PM
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a reply to: visitedbythem

Thank you Rider, your words mean a lot to me.



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 08:05 PM
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a reply to: breakingbs

Life can fade away sometimes but love will bring it back. You already know.👍



posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 08:08 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12




umm, ok
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