The Shadow Behind You..., page 1

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:37 PM

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The air of love was so clear,
Time Long ago I was lost,

Seas of love and warmth took us away,
The cloud of warm rain told me your name.

It was you who was moved by me,
A shadow close to the sea kissed my lips.

The rising waters edge was your hands pulling at me,
All the lost fish over the sea found you for me.

As the earth saw the blue moon,
The shadow behind you was me...🐓
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Skid Mark

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:43 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12
Blue moon, you saw me standing alone
Without a dream in my heart
Without a love of my own...
Rodgers and Hart (1934)

Good one, man. Keep up the good work.

Quantum12

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:44 PM
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a reply to: Skid Mark

I reall want to thank you Skid Mark.

breakingbs

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:45 PM
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Either you met a girl or you're writing 1000 love poems online.

?? Shrugs...

Quantum12

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:47 PM
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a reply to: breakingbs

Lol you are right. It was the first part.

breakingbs

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:49 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

-Awesome.- ...

awareness10

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:49 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

I really love this one it's beautiful, Thankyou.🐓

Quantum12

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:52 PM
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a reply to: awareness10

I love you it was who has changed my life. You are chicken...🐓
Olive juice too!!!
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Quantum12

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:54 PM
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a reply to: breakingbs

I want to thank you, have a great day!

Skid Mark

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:56 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12
Just keep writing your poems. They're all good so far. Even if I don't comment, I've at least starred and flagged them.

breakingbs

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:57 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

Good for you. I'll trust you on the whole...(?)chicken and olive juice thing. Just gotta ride with life you know.

o thank u 2 (edited cuz someone else replied...)

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tadaman

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 07:59 PM
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One of your best thus far. I loved it!

visitedbythem

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 08:01 PM
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Good one Q!

Quantum12

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 08:03 PM
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a reply to: tadaman

Tadaman, coming from you that means a lot. I am happy to see you!

Quantum12

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 08:04 PM
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a reply to: visitedbythem

Thank you Rider, your words mean a lot to me.

Quantum12

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 08:05 PM
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a reply to: breakingbs

Life can fade away sometimes but love will bring it back. You already know.👍

breakingbs

posted on Aug, 25 2016 @ 08:08 PM
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a reply to: Quantum12

umm, ok
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