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[DRG2015] Tears Amongst the Stars

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posted on Feb, 21 2015 @ 10:56 PM
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a reply to: swanne

It means that there is a lot of fire in your story.

I thought firery was a word ,
but the computer underlines the word with red, when I type it , suggesting that my spelling of it is wrong.
However I looked it up and no, that word is correct.

I put sp next to the word, as at that moment I was not sure,

Now I have not checked but I think sp is a short way to suggest that the spelling is wrong ?

Anyhow firery is a word and does describe a lot of fire and was meant in the best possible way.

I won't be on here as much as I am being scaled back on my internet connection soon , maybe it's for the best.

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Correction , it is spelt wrong , the correct spelling is fiery ,

edit on 21-2-2015 by my1percent because: (no reason given)




posted on Feb, 22 2015 @ 06:57 AM
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originally posted by: my1percent
However I looked it up and no, that word is correct.

Yes, such a word does exists... However it has a different meaning...


firery
To act spunky or sassy while annoying your friends

www.urbandictionary.com...



Now I have not checked but I think sp is a short way to suggest that the spelling is wrong ?

Yes, you are right; indeed it does! I just learned something new.



I thought firery was a word ,
but the computer underlines the word with red, when I type it , suggesting that my spelling of it is wrong.

(*I open my mouth, about to speak...*)



Correction , it is spelt wrong , the correct spelling is fiery ,

(*...I close my mouth and nod with a confirmation smile. *)

I am relieved that the story did felt fiery. I am french Canadian, conveying the emotions in English is still a challenge - well, at least when it comes to literature.
So thanks for the encouragement! It really means alot.



posted on Feb, 22 2015 @ 07:29 AM
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WOW very very very good !


leolady



posted on Feb, 22 2015 @ 07:32 AM
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a reply to: swanne

Good on ya



I saw that spunky /sassy explaination as well , as I did check it actually , but must have been too fast and got all confused, not hard with my head. lol.
I am still having spelling problems too.
It was a difficult weekend .
I will send you a pm about French Canadian ?
Cheers

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posted on Feb, 22 2015 @ 07:38 AM
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originally posted by: swanne
Don't be afraid to comment - It's the first fantasy short story I wrote, I could use some critics...




I friggin loved it. I am curious to what happened in your life to incite you to create this. Are you looking for your Green Dragon?



posted on Feb, 22 2015 @ 08:19 AM
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originally posted by: birhan


I friggin loved it. I am curious to what happened in your life to incite you to create this. Are you looking for your Green Dragon?

Indeed I am.

Long ago, I lost my love. We were very deep friends but both time and space went between us, and I never saw her again.

Now I am without a soulmate, but I secretly hope that one day, I will find one.

Never stop hoping. Ever.



posted on Feb, 22 2015 @ 08:50 AM
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Thank you LeoLady!



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