I really enjoyed that, however, I would have liked to envision billowy clouds in that deep and wide chasm instead of jagged rocks, that would allow
you to soar free away from that world and which would wrap around you to break your fall, then carry you off to another place.
29-4-2014 by InTheLight because: (no reason given)
This is one of my most favorite poems of yours, greyeagle! I appreciate the form of it, and can relate to the feeling you describe. The language
carries depth and does not insist on a rhyme where one does not need to be.
Failure, vulnerability and transformation - choice - very good!!!
I appreciate your kind words. I know my words are often raw and perhaps lacking structure but they are what I got. I endeavor to always be real. My
hope is that as I continue to write I will get better at communicating.
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