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On A Southern Train…

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posted on Jan, 3 2024 @ 11:25 PM
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My beautiful road I have been on, I can see the world’s view of tracks by day or night. I love the way she goes around the bend, the bend of time. The noises my southern train makes as she passes by love, love from afar, a far land.

She whistles in the distance of thoughts, thoughts of new and never seen roads. Her time is spend meeting lovers through high valleys of time, she can even move snow. Lovers in the night dance around her tracks, they make way for her next moves.

The smoke seen from different lives of time pass as she keeps on pushing her loving ways, her ways of solitude into time. At every bell in the distance she roars with more love, love to keep you imagining.

Over long hills of love she sweeps north to find love again, this time is her last time. She now sits pretty at the Heny Ford Museum in Dearborn Michigan…



posted on Jan, 3 2024 @ 11:35 PM
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a reply to: JJproductions



posted on Jan, 3 2024 @ 11:46 PM
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a reply to: visitedbythem

The Guitar is amazing! Are you sure that is about a “ Long Coal Train” lol!

edit on 3-1-2024 by JJproductions because: (no reason given)



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 12:26 AM
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a reply to: JJproductions

Very cool

Have you see anything on The Self Balancing Monorail = Brennan Monorail




posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 02:55 AM
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a reply to: tarantulabite1

Wow, thank you for posting this! Everything and all the work behind this is amazing! I think you need to bring it back and blow away the two rail train!



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 10:41 AM
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a reply to: JJproductions

Just saw this wonderful piece. Thanks for sharing!




posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 10:56 AM
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a reply to: JJproductions

That's excellent, JJ.


I enjoy this style of writing and I love steam trains, so an awesome combination.




posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 11:28 AM
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a reply to: zosimov

I love that song.



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 11:34 AM
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a reply to: zosimov

Thank you for the tunes! Thank you!



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 11:34 AM
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a reply to: Encia22

Thank you so much! Steam trains are amazing!



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 12:06 PM
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a reply to: visitedbythem

Same



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 12:06 PM
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a reply to: JJproductions

Thanks for posting!! Hope you have a great day!




posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 12:21 PM
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So lyrical with perfect imagery!



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 12:31 PM
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a reply to: lilzazz

Thank you, I miss your wonderful writings!



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 12:43 PM
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a reply to: zosimov

If you need a good cry today, listen to the words. Scott left on a Southern Train and never came back.



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 12:48 PM
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originally posted by: JJproductions
a reply to: lilzazz

Thank you, I miss your wonderful writings!


Thank you, I'm still writing but putting my efforts into what I hope will be a socially relevant screenplay. Inspired by the pages of ATS. Low budget so I can also produce it. Streaming one day I hope....



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 12:49 PM
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a reply to: lilzazz

ALL your productions are always amazing!



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 12:57 PM
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originally posted by: JJproductions
a reply to: lilzazz

ALL your productions are always amazing!


Thanks, I'll send you a link to one of our latest productions via U2U.



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 12:58 PM
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a reply to: lilzazz

Thank you! Can’t wait to see it!



posted on Jan, 4 2024 @ 02:03 PM
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originally posted by: lilzazz

originally posted by: JJproductions
a reply to: lilzazz

ALL your productions are always amazing!


Thanks, I'll send you a link to one of our latest productions via U2U.



I am blown away by your productions! Wow!




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