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posted on Oct, 4 2013 @ 12:18 AM
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Naïve

I walk cloud-lightly
Not seeing the edge
Not knowing there is one
Fool that I am
The creeping monster
A breath behind
And I am blissfully benign
Cordial even
To looming Death’s
Sharp cutting wit
Like I lack a sense
Others have in common
Tripping my way
To fallen fate
If I rise again
My step won’t
Dance
The way it did
The world having
Made sure I regret
My chance
To set a new-colored spin
To time
And hope
And dreams
Or will my wisdom
Earned with blood
Jut my chin in defiance
I leap again
Full knowing
Self-reliance
To embrace the good
To deny Death
The win…
And fall
If I must
Ashes and Dust
Clear-eyed and willing
To gently trust



posted on Oct, 4 2013 @ 10:01 AM
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Nice piece of writing i like it. A bit different from the usual story as well....."Thumbs Up"..



posted on Oct, 4 2013 @ 10:20 AM
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Well done!



posted on Oct, 4 2013 @ 10:46 AM
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Thank you - I appreciate you taking the time to read it!

Nothing like telling the world I am an idiot...and that I'd do it again. lol!

peace,
AB



posted on Oct, 4 2013 @ 10:48 AM
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Hey Abeverage,

Thank you for stopping by to read. Most appreciated!
I'm glad you liked it.

peace,
AB



posted on Oct, 4 2013 @ 10:51 AM
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Hey there's nothing wrong with being an idiot..I have been one since day one!....It's the ones who don't realise they are idiots which are the true fools



posted on Oct, 4 2013 @ 11:53 AM
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Star and flag friend

That was good. *snappng my fingers*

Peace and love
-nat cat-



posted on Oct, 4 2013 @ 12:10 PM
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Hey, thanks Natalia!


I appreciate you stopping by to read it!

peace to you,

AB



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