Five minutes

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A life time can pass

worthing five minutes

that we never had

lying on a beach

thinking of you

but you are gone

and never will come back

empty sky

empty heart

love limits

a border...

..of five minutes

lost in time I am

without you

looking for the second

Oh how much can be

how hard it is

to give for a heart

that loved you so much

5 minutes

in a life time

a beating butterfly wings

pass in one second

and my wings are hurting me

how deep can be the passion

of unspoken words

how deep can be...time

waiting

forever

for you...5 minutes.

like falling petals of a flower

dying of thirst

.....of love,

dries

without a drop of water

and five minutes later

the rain has begun

but she is gone

to meet the sun

eternally for you

my love

because we didn't met

eternally...5 minutes.


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Is this your writing?

Originally posted by ValentineWiggin
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Is this your writing?

Oh,yes it is,a feeling of lifetime without ...five minutes.

I truly like it. As I read I was reminded of my great grandmother who passed. Very beautiful

reply to post by ValentineWiggin

I truly like it. As I read I was reminded of my great grandmother who passed. Very beautiful

I am happy you like it,oh,and I am sorry you lost your great grandmother.

reply to post by piequal3because14

Nice words...
Baring your soul can be cathartic. ( And brave ! )

Look for the positives in everything & be true to yourself.

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Look for the positives in everything & be true to yourself.

Everything can be positive if we see that small amount of '+' in everything,for those who have eyes to see.

But they didn't care,and never they will be.....

Thank you for your input Timely, and have a nice time here on ATS.