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reply posted on 11-11-2004 @ 01:36 PM by ben91069
optimus fett says:

id like to see the realisation of suddenley not being able to put fuel
in your car,boat lawnmower etc set in.

Watching all those people come to terms with the fact that theyve
taken oil for granted for so many years.


skychief:
I think it would be more effective if you concentrated more on the
individual human side of this disaster and not the big world wide
disaster. It would also be nice to see the ingenuity of man come into
play.


The story begins and ends in a sort of shanty town where between the
main female role and her daughter, she relays the triumphs and hardships
of going through the collapse - quite possibly one of the most difficult
transitions mankind may have to deal with. Like any good movie, the
human aspect is a necessity. Primarily the story revolves around the
lives of ordinary people, but some scenes will be added enough so to
show the larger picture. As to how society will cope after-the-fact
regarding alternatives; I do not know. I imagine an entire movie
could be made about that, but I am leaning on setting up the ending to
leave it to the viewers imagination and to offer a shred of hope in light
of what may happen.


Byrd says:
If you tell a story that has no happy ending; no success, then you are
telling the culture as a whole that there is no purpose in life and no
purpose in trying to find good solutions or partial solutions or new
solutions because it's all going to fall apart in horrible wars.


Everyone is entitled to their opinion and I respect that. One of the
hurdles I have read writers reveal is that they struggle with a good
story. There are a million different possibilites of what to write, not
including the style of writing and other factors. I have found myself
asking the question, should I scrap this and create something else that
a different audience would like? The point is, that some people will
enjoy it and some won't - you cannot please everyone all the time. Even
critics may enjoy it as they sometimes are entertained by what they hate,
like some Howard Stern listeners.

You are correct in your own opinions that you see things in a way
that says negativity breeds negativity. You seem to believe that if
we aren't always shown the positive outcome of something that people
will tend to get discouraged and give up. Some people probably do so.
Life, however, is not about winning all the time. We all meet our ends,
so to speak, and there is nothing we can do about it. Perhaps we need
to see that without oil, that life can still have meaning and a purpose,
just like it did for most of civilization. The oil age is only a recent
thing and people did just fine without it. We do have one advantage
that our ancestors did not have - and that is technology. So you see
I am not trying to paint a picture of doom and gloom, but one of a hard
change that we would all have in order to live more harmoniously with
one another and the world.


reply posted on 13-11-2004 @ 09:38 PM by aWoman
Why do it for no profit? You ought to at least try to recover your investments in this film.

How about a movie with many twists to the plot, something like the whole family ends up having to resort to riding bicycles since the world's oil supply is drying up, and then tremors and earthquakes increase and are found due to man's having drawn all of the oil out of the ground, resulting in instability of the infrastructure of the earth.

And one day little Johnny and his sister Susie are riding their bikes and the earth opens up and they find themselves in the midst of a subterranian world. And they discover from the creatures who populate this place that they hold the key secret to an unthought of alterative energy source.

And then mom and dad, in the meantime, find some of their clothing at the entrance of the giant crevasse and realize they must find their children, and embark on a journey into the earth to rescue them.

Fortunately dad is an experienced spelunker and geophysicist who knows his stuff and mom is a well endowed scantily clad hystronic screamer who'll make every twist and turn of the story tillitating.

And after overcoming numerous obstacles and taking huge risks, the whole family manages to return to the surface of the earth, and a big tremor causes the crevasse to close up and seal off the creatures below forever.

Then the father shares the secret with everyone and saves the world, and becomes a hero!

p.s. is it possible there are grants available you could apply for to help fund this project?



reply posted on 13-11-2004 @ 10:08 PM by ben91069
Wow, aWoman.....I think you could be a writer with your imagination you have. I had to re-read your post a time or two to understand where you are coming from. The ideas you have is definitely a different twist and I appreciate your input. I do have a few surprises, although not as over-the-top as the ones you presented. The main difficulty is I do not want to stray too far into science fiction or ideas that would take a lot of time to develop into being believeable. Any idea could be made to seem real, although I am trying to convey a sense of gritty realism here without going too far. I do, however, wish to show a spiritual side of the story towards the end, which could be classified as fiction depending on how you look at it - possibly a saving maricle or something, but I am still working on the particulars.

Moving on, recouping the investment would be fine, but one of the goals of this project; which I am obsessed with, is to do it on a shoestring budget while creating the look of a big investment. The technology available today makes this possible. Follow the link below for an independent short called, "The405". The producers claim it was made for around $300, but reviewing the equipment used in the making came out to over a $10,000 investment in hardware and software. I am already finding effects solutions for free or close to it, as this is one of the goals. Yes, there are grants available for the Arts to work on writing, books, documentaries, etc. After all is said and done, however, I wish this to be a personal expression from me and whomever involved to the audience, free of charge (the best things in life seem to be free). My gratification is; personal creativity and making an emotional or intellectual impact on peoples minds.

405themovie.com
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