fall in secrets

the so called all consuming lie
people drifting then they die
sometimes inside while alive
a subtle push in despairs eye

I found my life to be controlled
temptations grip
deceptions old
but life is not defined by gold
you want us to sit and do as were told

my love and hate swirl around
this mechanistic rusting sound
switches pulled and levers drawn
i dance like its gone when will there be no return

shadows creep and sound they beep
words flow like the waters gain
i figure out they just oppose my actions
intentions to dispose

my mind is free my mind isnt me
my body and sex and waisting decree
these attempts are in vein all your luster lost
in frozen minds in waters costs

rotations infrasonic sound
energy thieves and doubters grounds
brewed to perfection a dangerous mix
of disconnect and tardiv bliss

i fight the fight
the blood and gore
my mind projects and settles the score
the psychic the lost the forgotten costs
of falling in weakness to their painful shocks

you want my mind ruining your face
crapping and waisting all over the place
this node burnt out
this signal is dead
gone dark for moments
so dark in your heads

i am not weak
i can be mean
just like you
back upon your face

reply to post by truthermantwo


I see that this was posted in the music forum.

Does it have its own music or is it sung to the tune of the Beverly Hill Billies or the Brady Bunch Theme?

I am not much on poetry but it seems to maintain a certain rhythm.

I thought so too. Music thread? Shoulda been in the POETRY Forum.

And as MUSIC...it lacked structure, chords and a melody line! NEXT>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!