Something that makes sense?

Something that makes sense?

For the darkness in your eyes
That memory of a closeness
That once were
Just an illusion
Or something real

Word doesn't say much
Except they are here flowing
To touch and return
To go deeper and find
Something that makes sense
Something that breathes
Is real
Together
Or
Just like distant ships
On the giant see
Separated by wast distance
Alone under the sky

Are we but this
Or something more
Just something
To make sense
In here
In there
Heart to heart
Step by step

In this world
Tell me
What makes your wall crumble
Your eyes open
Your heart feel
What makes you alive
This moment
Here and now

Where did you come from
Where will you go
Is these castles of sand we build
Just enough
To keep you
Moderate dissatisfied

Is there another balance
Another 'we'
To flow
To glow

Or is it just empty words
Flowing around for no reason
A glimpse of eternity
Between birth and death
A fragile touch of love
Gone before we know

Let it be deeper
Let it be you
Again
For real
To wake
To break
Those chains
Those prison walls
To see
What's real
What's you
In Truth
In Love

Please let me know
Please let it flow

Another day, another poem, eh?

reply to post by AkumaStreak


Yup... (o:

Much Love to you, my friend

reply to post by laffoe


The world is full of darkness and illusions. I know that to well.

In this world Tell me What makes your wall crumble Your eyes open Your heart feel What makes you alive This moment Here and now

............And im trying to find the answers to this to my friend. Thanks for posting. For there is always truths in your poems

reply to post by TheDoctor46


Yes so many illusions
So always search for the Truth deep inside yourself
There it'll be, where you are connected to that One Life that flows through us all
From there you can distinguish, resonate what is wrong and right
When we meet from there we make it right together
I have faith in you
I know you can

Much Love to you and thanks for being here

reply to post by laffoe


"Or is it just empty words
Flowing around for no reason
A glimpse of eternity
Between birth and death
A fragile touch of love
Gone before we know"

love that!! ive been working on poems..but they turn out dark..i did just write one taht wasnt dark at all...
anyway, thanks again for sharing your lovely words friend
~nat

reply to post by natalia


Thank you for being here my sweet friend
Poetry flows in your heart, so just keep on writing and shining
Sometimes when I write there is too so much pain, confusion or whatever
We all know that darkness
In a way it is the soul travelling back to itself
Pain of growing, and sometimes pain of feeling lost
When we share from there, the heart that listen will understand
Recognize
So just keep writing, then the core will reveal itself
Open up
Our innermost is true love, light and amazingness unfolded
So just keep writing
And it'll flow
I have faith in you

Lots of love to you