Personality divided.

The battle has been ignited.

She has metallic red hair,

With skin so fare;

She is like a porcelain doll.

Clementine has a wicked glare.

Eyes so mean being emerald green.

Where did you come from?

From within she replies.

She quickly takes over,

With such a calmness.

She is extremely clever,

And is also heartless.

Continue this battle til it it settled.

Don't know how this shall be handled.

Split personality.

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I just wanted to share. Judgment is inappropriate.

Thanks and be kind. I'm a sensitive lady.

Peace and love
~nat the blue eyed cat~

I'm judging you anyway, that's pretty good . Narcoleptic Buddha is right, your stuff is improving .

I'm slightly freaked out about your picking the name "Clementine" though , a long time ago a search for an anime character named Saya oddly led me to a deep space satellite named Clementine 1 , as I was looking over the stats for Clementine (on JPLs website) I got a strange message saying that they noticed what I was looking for and that I might like a website called Above Top Secret . I have no complaints , I think I was guided well that night . Absolutely true story .

But I think your starting to get a fan club here so keep it up, you really are getting good .

I like it. Its a well thought out and deep poem. The best poems to me are the real ones that come from within. The ones that are better off out than kept inside to ones self. Well done nat

The duality of our natures, well put, the battle of dark and light. Lovely.

Originally posted by natalia
Personality divided.

The battle has been ignited.

She has metallic red hair,

With skin so fare;

She is like a porcelain doll.

Clementine has a wicked glare.

Eyes so mean being emerald green.

Where did you come from?

From within she replies.

She quickly takes over,

With such a calmness.

She is extremely clever,

And is also heartless.

Continue this battle til it it settled.

Don't know how this shall be handled.

Split personality.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I just wanted to share. Judgment is inappropriate.

Thanks and be kind. I'm a sensitive lady.

Peace and love
~nat the blue eyed cat~

edit on 8-2-2013 by natalia because: (no reason given)

Judgment is inappropriate.

Judging

I love this one Nat, too personal to mess with
Genius personified
Love and hugs
Cody

Pretty well rounded you are!

I like your short stories and now your poetry as well.

Thanks for sharing this, very creative.

Blend57