Judgement Upon the Liberal East Coast continues: A Poem

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posted on Nov, 7 2012 @ 12:23 PM
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The warning came with Sandy and was not heeded. The cleansing has begun and with cold and snow will continue. The following poem, written last year, was inspired when the third storm was forecast to hit the area.

Cold Heart

The Northeast of the country, continues with snow and cold
DC and Massachussets, will see it all enfold

The laws that have been written, and put into effect
Will return the cold and cleansing, until it's put in check

The cold heart of the people, considering life not born,
Will experience the freezing, like the heart not adorned

From past and wrong ambitions, to evil plots and plans
Women kept on demanding, to end life in their hands

They eased the connotation, of what the truth beheld
But reality of purpose, murder must be yelled

How long with cycles turning, how long the cries for help
The souls try their returning, only ending in a yelp

And now the soul aborted, his chance to live again
Must now result in healing, in agony and pain

How could such a country, with freedom in it's worth
Be so cold and ugly, and deny a soul's rebirth

The doctors in the country, deny life in the womb
Cut it up while moving, a plastic bag it's tomb

In the third trimester, alive but life cut short
Cutting it up like fodder, soul in pain now abort

Northeast and DC proper, don't look for a reprieve
You couldn't extend mercy, life you didn't perceive

The clouds you now are seeing, the feelings cold and bleak
Are returning to your life streams, for God's promise you didn't keep

Again you have the choices, of protecting life inside
But God is tired of waiting, with actions you have been tried

So don't be so astonished, that conditions are extreme
The people and representatives, have trampled on God's dream


Copywrite 2011
edit on 7-11-2012 by prophetboy12 because: spelling
edit on 7-11-2012 by prophetboy12 because: (no reason given)




posted on Nov, 7 2012 @ 12:32 PM
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In other exciting news: Weather happens.



posted on Nov, 7 2012 @ 12:34 PM
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Are you from Westboro?
You guys didn't fare too well in Joplin, but you'll be safe poking at the East or West coast with your stick, they don't poke back too hard.

When your God hits them with a blizzard in July, then I'll pay attention, but when it happens in November, it's kind of a yawner.
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posted on Nov, 7 2012 @ 12:37 PM
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Hickery Dickery Dock
Seasons have a lot
Of rain and snow
and wind will blow.
Not God, just natures clock.

Copyright 2012.



posted on Nov, 7 2012 @ 12:40 PM
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If I really have to keep sharing this planet with people like you, then this cleansing can't come fast enough, I think I'll go sit outside and wait to be blown away.



posted on Nov, 7 2012 @ 12:40 PM
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If you fancy yourself a writer & this poem is an example of your work I would strongly suggest that you do not quit your day job.




posted on Nov, 7 2012 @ 12:41 PM
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If I had a dollar for every prediction that was posted on ATS I'd be a millionaire.
I have a prediction.

The sun will set tonight.
And will rise in the morning.

Bet you it comes true.



posted on Nov, 7 2012 @ 12:43 PM
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So is your God the devil?

No loving being would want to make humans and animals suffer.

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posted on Nov, 7 2012 @ 12:44 PM
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Abortion by State

By your logic, can we assume God just missed? He missed New Mexico by a mile, but he accidentally nailed New Jersey while aiming more for New York or New Hampshire?



posted on Nov, 7 2012 @ 12:45 PM
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Actually
I would look at these lines

And now the soul aborted, his chance to live again
Must now result in healing, in agony and pain


Doesn't match, either change again, or pain

I would write:

And now the soul aborted, this earth will never gain.
But just of lost potential, Its we who feel this pain.

or something to that effect..
Also, the soul aborted doesn't make sense since you cannot abort a soul..only the meatsack that houses said soul...I know what you were going for there, but due to the religious overtones of the poem, it is arguably suggesting humans can in fact abort a soul (not a body)...which in the subject matter cannot happen (only God can unmake a soul if he so chooses..and even then it is arguable considering there is a hell verses just oblivion)



posted on Nov, 7 2012 @ 01:11 PM
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By your logic god must really hate the bible belt. Why else would he send hundreds of tornados every year to wipe a few towns off the map every year?



posted on Nov, 9 2012 @ 04:06 PM
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Conservatives and Christians,
and fools with midget minds,
ignorantly cast their judgments
even when in rhyme.

With their inflated egos
I find it rather odd
when PRIDEFUL people think
they have the right to judge like God.

Hypocrites and liars --
and fools right to the end--
never thinking that their judgments
in themselves might be a sin.
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