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Originally posted by shaneslaughta
All I see is red versus blue everywhere I go.
Originally posted by Destinyone
reply to post by shaneslaughta
Two paragraphs is an English paper....
I would take your initial premise, expand it to at least a whole page, if not more. jmoho...
Des
Always voting for democrats or republicans is perpetuating, the endless cycle of stagnation of the United States political system.
The two major us political parties used to be joined at the hip. 1825 was the last time a democratic republican, John Quincy Adams held office.
It was short lived because of the north south differences on slavery.
Many of the Whig party leaders, such as Abraham Lincoln joined the new Republican Party on the opposition of slavery.
It’s been well over a hundred years since there was any major party change, and every four years we become embroiled in a political war with the same two outcomes; Red or Blue.
There is hope, and it comes in the form of change, and I’m not talking about switching from republican to democrat.
Red or Blue, Isn’t it the same shade of purple in the end?
Originally posted by shaneslaughta
Shane
Informal Response 2
September 14, 2012
Society, we have grown stagnant in our political affiliations. All I see is Red versus Blue everywhere I go. Always voting for Democrats or Republicans is perpetuating the endless cycle of stagnation of the United States political system. I’m tired of seeing people complain about the problems that this Country has. In order to make changes we must first change the elected officials. There are other Political Parties that Main Stream Media doesn’t cover well. We the people, have the ability to effect great change; we just need to think outside the box. Our political system was designed for more than two parties, but the news only focuses on the two. In my opinion, that fact is why voters are only voting Red or Blue. As I was shown in college, if you always do the same thing you will always get the same end result. It’s time to open our eyes and our minds. There are others that want to change this Country for the better. You have to give them the chance, let them into office. There were some smart people in the history of the United States that knew this.
The two major U.S. Political parties used to be joined at the hip. 1825 was the last time a Democratic Republican, John Quincy Adams held office. This was the final nail in the coffin for the caucus system. In 1828 Andrew Jackson and Martin Van Buren moved to the new Democratic Party. John Quincy Adams and Henry Clay formed the National Republicans Party. That same year, it then again transformed into another party, the Whig Party. It was short lived because of the North/South differences on slavery. Many of the Whig party leaders, such as Abraham Lincoln joined the new Republican Party on the opposition of slavery. These men realized that when you’re not achieving the result you desire you need to change the variables and they did, time and time again. That way of thinking has been lost for some time now. It’s been well over a hundred years since there was any major party change, and every four years we become embroiled in a political war with the same two outcomes: Red or Blue. Are you all voting for the lesser of two evils? There are always other options that the majority has failed to see.
There are other Political Parties around but they never get the media coverage they deserve. These parties, I believe, are the free thinkers or more open minded individuals that the United States of America has bred. They do not get the recognition they deserve. We could all vote on an independent party and incite change, which these free thinkers are hoping to accomplish. This current cycle has been going on for far too long. There is hope, and it comes in the form of change, and I’m not talking about switching from Republican to Democrat. Those Parties have been around for over a hundred years, flopping power back and forth. Instead of bitching endlessly about the problems, take an active stance and vote for independents. Red or Blue, isn’t it the same shade of purple in the end?
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Republican and Democrat should both be capitalized.
Originally posted by shaneslaughta
And anything that i can change to make this essay better, any writers or English teachers on here?
Gulp, eagerly awaiting your replies.
Originally posted by OrphenFire
I got a bit of proofreading for you!
There is an unnecessary comma in your first sentence.
Always voting for democrats or republicans is perpetuating, the endless cycle of stagnation of the United States political system.
Delete that comma.
Capitalize "us" into "U.S." And it should be Democratic-Republican, capitalized and hyphenated.
The two major us political parties used to be joined at the hip. 1825 was the last time a democratic republican, John Quincy Adams held office.
The following sentence...
It was short lived because of the north south differences on slavery.
... could be better worded as: It was short lived because of the differences between the North and the South.
"On the opposition of slavery" could be worded differently.
Many of the Whig party leaders, such as Abraham Lincoln joined the new Republican Party on the opposition of slavery.
Also party should be capitalized as it is attached to Whig.
This should be a COLON : not a semicolon.
It’s been well over a hundred years since there was any major party change, and every four years we become embroiled in a political war with the same two outcomes; Red or Blue.
Republican and Democrat should both be capitalized.
There is hope, and it comes in the form of change, and I’m not talking about switching from republican to democrat.
"Isn't" should be lower-case.
Red or Blue, Isn’t it the same shade of purple in the end?
Other than these minor issues, your paper is good and the message is very good.